Bike— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Be concise, use correct tense, and organize into a clear topic sentence plus one or two supporting details. Avoid repetition and incorrect words (e.g., 'insured' wrong meaning here). Use linking words for clarity (for example, 'because' or 'so').

Ví dụ: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. It was a small bicycle with two training wheels at the back because I was learning to balance, so my parents bought it to keep me safe.

Gợi ý: Start with a clear opinion sentence, then give specific reasons using linking words. Correct awkward phrasing ('RA', 'yes') and be specific about who 'other people' refers to (drivers, authorities). Keep it to two or three sentences maximum.

Ví dụ: I don't think bicycles are very popular in my country. Most people prefer cars or jeeps for convenience, and bike lanes are often ignored by drivers, making cycling unsafe.

× Yes I do have a bike when I was a child but it comes with extra 2 wheels at the back so that I don't have to fall down or be insured since I only I'm only a first timer in using it.

✓ Yes, I had a bike when I was a child, but it had two extra wheels at the back so that I wouldn't fall down, since I was a beginner at riding it.

The sentence mixes present and past tenses. The question asks about the past, so verbs should be in the past tense (had, was, had). 'Do have' is present and should be 'had'. 'Comes' should be 'had'. 'Don't have to fall down' should be 'wouldn't fall down' to express purpose/result in past. 'Be insured' is incorrect in context; likely meant 'since I was only a beginner' so use 'was a beginner' rather than 'I'm only a first timer'. Also, use 'two' rather than '2' in formal writing. Suggestions: keep all verbs referring to past events in past tense, use 'beginner' or 'first timer' correctly as a noun phrase, and use consistent tense for the whole sentence.

× I don't think bikes are popular in our country because we usually RA ride in a Jeep yes car and the bike lane in our country is not taken seriously by the other people.

✓ I don't think bikes are popular in our country because we usually ride in cars or jeeps, and the bike lanes in our country are not taken seriously by other people.

The original sentence has pronoun and article problems and unclear wording. 'We usually RA ride in a Jeep yes car' is fragmented and should be 'we usually ride in cars or jeeps.' 'The bike lane' should be plural 'bike lanes' when speaking generally. 'By the other people' is wordy; use 'by other people.' Suggestions: remove filler words, choose the correct plural form for general statements, and use concise pronouns ('cars' instead of 'a car' when generalizing).