Part 1
Giám khảo
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Thí sinh
No, I don't have a back because my mom don't like it. I think it's dangerous.
Giám khảo
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Thí sinh
Yeah, it's popular. Many peoples have bags.
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Điểm: 40.0Gợi ý: 首先要改正语法和发音错误,并用更自然的表达回答。回答要直接回应问题(过去时),然后给出原因并可简短扩展。避免拼写和语法错误(bike/back, don't/didn't),并控制在最多五句内。可使用连接词如 because 或 so 来使句子连贯。具体建议:1) 使用过去时态“No, I didn’t have a bike.” 2) 说明原因并补充细节“because my mother thought it was dangerous.” 3) 可加一两句简短说明结果或感受,例如“I felt a little disappointed, but I understood her concern.”
Ví dụ: No, I didn’t have a bike when I was a child because my mother thought it was dangerous. As a result, I rarely cycled and usually walked to school. I felt a bit disappointed at the time, but I understand why she was worried.
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Điểm: 45.0Gợi ý: 回答要用完整、语法正确的句子并提供具体细节或例子。注意主谓一致和名词单复数(people 而不是 peoples),以及代词一致(it’s -> they’re 指复数)。可以用连接词如 For example 或 Because 来扩展理由或举例。控制在最多五句内。具体建议:1) 用更准确的主句,例如“Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country.” 2) 提供原因或例子,如多数人骑车通勤或学生使用自行车。3) 避免模糊词,给出数量感或场景。
Ví dụ: Yes, bicycles are quite popular in my country because many people use them for short trips and commuting. For example, students often ride bikes to school and many cities have bike lanes that make cycling convenient.
× No, I don't have a back because my mom don't like it. I think it's dangerous.
✓ No, I didn't have a bike because my mom didn't like it. I think it's dangerous.
原句存在几个问题: 1) “don't have”用于现在时,而问题是询问过去(when you were a child),应使用过去时“didn't have”。 2) “back”是拼写错误,应为“bike”。 3) “my mom don't like it”主语为第三人称单数“my mom”,谓语应使用过去时的第三人称形式“didn't like”。 改进建议:注意时态与提问时间一致(过去时),注意拼写,主语为第三人称单数时动词在过去式用“didn't + 原形”。
× Yeah, it's popular. Many peoples have bags.
✓ Yeah, they're popular. Many people have bikes.
原句问题: 1) “it's popular”指代不明确,问的是“bikes”,复数应使用“they're popular”或“This is popular”更自然; 2) “peoples”错误,表示“许多人/人们”应为不可数名词“people”,不用加复数-s; 3) “have bags”与上下文不相关,应为“have bikes”。 改进建议:确保代词与先行词数一致(复数名词用复数代词或动词),使用正确名词形式“people”,并保持词义一致。