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Part 1

Giám khảo

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

Thí sinh

Did you have a bag when you were a child?

Giám khảo

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

Thí sinh

Do you think arts are popular in your country?

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Part 1

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

Điểm: 30.0

Gợi ý: 你回答偏离了考官的问题,未能直接回应“自行车”这个话题。此外,回答缺乏内容、句子结构也不是陈述句,无法展示词汇和语法能力。改进建议:1) 听清并理解问题关键词,先用一句主题句直接回答(肯定或否定);2) 提供1–2个具体细节作为支持,用连词如“because”或“when”连接;3) 控制在最多5句内,保持自然与简洁。

Ví dụ: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. I remember riding it to my friend’s house every afternoon because our neighborhood was safe and quiet. Sometimes my father taught me tricks, which made riding very fun. Those memories made me feel independent and active.

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

Điểm: 30.0

Gợi ý: 你没有回答考官关于“自行车是否流行”的问题,而是重复了另一个问题主题(艺术),因此未能展示观点或支持理由。改进建议:1) 直接给出你的观点(Yes/No/Mixed)作为第一句;2) 用具体数据或例子支持观点,如交通习惯、城市设施或个人观察;3) 使用连接词(however, because, for example)使论述连贯并限制在5句内。

Ví dụ: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country, especially in cities with bike lanes. For example, many students and office workers cycle to save time and avoid traffic. However, their popularity varies—rural areas rely more on cars because distances are longer.

Ngữ pháp

Incorrect use of pronouns

× Did you have a bag when you were a child?

Yes, I did. I had a bike when I was a child.

学生回答的问题与考官原问句不匹配。考官问的是“你小时候有自行车吗?”,学生回答却改成了问句“你小时候有包吗?”,这属于代词/指代和句子引用错误,导致意思不清。改为肯定/否定句并直接回答原问题可以保持时态一致(过去时)。建议:仔细听问题主语和宾语,直接使用与问题一致的名词(bike)并用过去时回答(did/had)。

Incorrect use of nouns/word choice

× Do you think arts are popular in your country?

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

学生把考官问题中的名词从'bikes'错误地改为'arts',改变了问题主题,属于词汇使用错误(在给定列表中最接近的是名词/代词使用问题)。应保持与考官原问题相同的名词以确保回答相关。建议:回答或复述问题时确认关键词一致,若想谈艺术,应先确认考官是否问到该主题。

Từ vựng trọng tâm

PopularWell-liked; Nonspecialist; Widespread; Mass
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