Bike— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Improve fluency and clarity by removing hesitations and fillers (uh), use a clear topic sentence, add one or two specific supporting details, and keep to 3–4 concise sentences. Organize ideas with simple linking words (for example, and, so, because). Also correct grammar (past tense consistency and articles) and use more precise vocabulary (e.g., "favorite means of transport").

Ví dụ: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. It was my favorite means of transport and I rode it almost every day after school. I often cycled with my friends to the park and we sometimes raced down the quiet streets. Because I practiced a lot, I became quite confident riding on busy roads.

Gợi ý: Make the answer more natural by using a clear topic sentence, correcting grammar (use plural/singular appropriately and correct tense), and adding a specific reason or example to support your claim. Use linking words like "because" or "for example" to connect ideas. Keep it concise (2–3 sentences).

Ví dụ: Yes, bikes are very popular in my country because they are affordable and convenient for short trips. For example, many people cycle to work or market, and I often see groups of cyclists near my neighborhood in the mornings.

× Yes, I had uh, it used to be my favorite vehicle when I was here.

✓ Yes, I had one; it used to be my favorite vehicle when I was a child.

The original sentence mixes pronouns and vague time expression 'here' which is incorrect for referring to childhood. Replace 'it' with 'one' to refer back to 'bike' and use 'when I was a child' to match the past time frame. Also remove filler 'uh' for clarity.

× I used a lock edge uh, with my friend and my free time.

✓ I used a lock on it, and I rode with my friend in my free time.

'Used a lock edge' is incorrect phrasing; 'use a lock on it' correctly describes locking the bike. Prepositions: 'with my friend' is fine for accompanying someone, but 'my free time' requires 'in' to indicate when the activity happened. Also separate into two clauses for clarity.

× Uh, but in my childhood, uh, I like riding bike.

✓ But in my childhood, I liked riding my bike.

The sentence refers to a past time ('in my childhood') so the verb should be past tense ('liked') not present ('like'). Also 'riding bike' needs a determiner: 'riding my bike' or 'riding a bike'.

× Absolutely, yes. In my country most of the people are using bike to go somewhere and also, uh, there were many bikers around our house.

✓ Absolutely. In my country, most people use bikes to get around, and there were also many cyclists near our house.

Mixes present progressive with general truth: use simple present 'use' for habitual actions. 'Are using bike' is ungrammatical—use 'use bikes' or 'use bikes to get around'. Also 'bikers' is acceptable but 'cyclists' is more natural; maintain consistency of tense for the second clause if referring to past local situation: 'there were' is fine but ensure phrasing flows. Added commas and corrected plural forms.