Part 1
Giám khảo
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Thí sinh
Yes I did, and I have a small purple bike and I really love to ride it.
Giám khảo
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Thí sinh
Yes, and in my country or in my city, most of people like riding bikes to school or go for work.
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Điểm: 75.0Gợi ý: 回答要更自然且時態一致;避免冗長並給出一到兩個具體細節來證明你的感受。例如可以說明何時騎、誰陪你或最喜歡的回憶。還要注意句子數量不超過五句,並使用連接詞使語句更連貫。
Ví dụ: Yes, I did. I had a small purple bike that I loved riding around my neighborhood when I was about eight. My older cousin often taught me tricks, so I remember feeling proud when I learned to ride without training wheels.
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Điểm: 70.0Gợi ý: 回應要更精確並改善語法與詞序,提供具體原因或情境支持你的觀點。使用連接詞(例如 because, for example, so)使答案更有邏輯,並注意不可多餘重複。
Ví dụ: Yes, I think bikes are very popular in my city because many people use them to commute to work or school. For example, there are bike lanes and affordable rental schemes, so cycling is a common and convenient choice.
× Yes I did, and I have a small purple bike and I really love to ride it.
✓ Yes, I did. I had a small purple bike and I really loved to ride it.
问题类型:现在时态 / 过去时态混淆。考官问的是过去("Did you have... when you were a child?"),回答第一部分“Yes I did”正确,但接下来的部分用了现在时态(have / really love),与提问的过去时间不一致。建议将动词改为过去时:have → had,love → loved,并在句子之间加标点分开两部分,使表达更清晰。示例改正:"Yes, I did. I had a small purple bike and I really loved to ride it."
× Yes, and in my country or in my city, most of people like riding bikes to school or go for work.
✓ Yes, and in my country, or in my city, most people like riding bikes to school or to go to work.
问题类型:单复数及搭配错误('most of people' 不正确)。正确说法是 'most people'(不加 of),此外并列短语的动词形式应一致:'like riding... or going...' 或使用不定式保持一致:'to school or to go to work'。另外建议在并列结构中保持形式一致性并补充介词:'to go to work' 更自然。改正示例:"Yes, and in my country, or in my city, most people like riding bikes to school or to go to work."