Bike— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Improve grammar (tense and agreement), use clear topic sentence, reduce fillers, and provide specific details with correct vocabulary. Keep answer to 2–4 sentences and use linking words for clarity. For example, start with a direct statement in past tense, then add age, appearance, and a brief reason or memory using linking words such as “when” or “because.”

Ví dụ: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. I got it at about five years old, and it was a small blue bicycle with two training wheels, which made it stable for learning. I remember practicing in the park near my house because my parents wanted me to be safe.

Gợi ý: Use a clear topic sentence and support it with specific reasons and linking words. Correct grammar (plural/singular, tense) and vocabulary (bicycle/bike, children) and avoid vague absolutes. Provide one or two concise reasons and an example or statistic if possible.

Ví dụ: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country. For example, many families own at least one bicycle because children use them for short trips and exercise, and parents often buy one for each child so households with three children might have three bikes.

× Yes, I have a bike when I was a little umm, if I'm not mistaken, when I five years old, I guess that was a small bite with blue colours and that also have two small Rhoda, what we call that? Ah, I don't know, just for stable.

✓ Yes, I had a bike when I was little. If I'm not mistaken, when I was five years old. I guess it was a small bike with blue colours and it also had two small wheels, what do we call that? Ah, I don't know, just for balance.

The speaker mixes present tense 'have' with past context 'when I was a little'; use past tense 'had'. 'When I five years old' is missing the past-tense verb 'was'. 'That also have' should be 'it also had' to match past tense and refer to the bike. Use 'wheels' rather than 'Rhoda' and 'for balance' is the intended meaning. Suggestion: keep tense consistent (past) for childhood events and use correct verbs and nouns.

× Yes sure, I think everyone had at least one bite in their house.

✓ Yes, sure, I think everyone had at least one bike in their house.

The word 'bite' is a phonetic/misspelling error for 'bike'. Also 'everyone had at least one bike in their household' uses singular 'everyone' with singular 'one bike' which is fine; ensure correct noun spelling. Suggestion: use 'bike' and optionally change 'in their house' to 'in their household' for clarity.

× Depends on how many child they have.

✓ It depends on how many children they have.

The sentence lacks a subject; add 'It' and use plural 'children' (not 'child') to match 'how many'. 'They have' is correct for plural. Suggestion: include the dummy subject 'It' for clearness and use plural noun with 'how many'.

× Maybe if they have three they get 3 bite for their own child.

✓ Maybe if they have three, they get three bikes for their children.

'3 bite' is incorrect: 'bite' should be 'bike' and must be plural 'bikes' when referring to more than one. Also 'their own child' is unclear; use 'their children' to match having three. Suggestion: spell 'bike' correctly and use plural nouns to agree with plural numbers.