Bike— Part 1 Báo cáo

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Part 1

Giám khảo

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

Thí sinh

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

Giám khảo

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

Thí sinh

Yes, I think bikes are popular in our country because there are lots of youth that I am seeing on the road bicycling together with their friends and also bicycles.

Đánh giá

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Part 1

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

Điểm: 30.0

Gợi ý: Avoid repeating the examiner's question. Answer directly with a clear topic sentence (yes/no) and give one or two specific supporting details. Keep it natural and concise (no more than 5 sentences). Use linking words like "and" or "because" to connect ideas.

Ví dụ: Yes, I did. I had a small blue bike that my parents bought me when I was seven, and I used to ride it to school and around the neighborhood with my friends.

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

Điểm: 55.0

Gợi ý: Start with a clear topic sentence, then give one or two specific reasons or examples. Avoid vague phrases and redundant words. Use correct subject-verb agreement and smoother linking (e.g., "because", "for example"). Keep it within five sentences and improve grammar: "youth" → "young people" and remove repetition.

Ví dụ: Yes, I think bicycles are quite popular in my country because many young people cycle for fun and to commute. For example, I often see groups of students riding together on weekends, and some cities have introduced bike-share programs to make cycling more convenient.

Ngữ pháp

Incorrect use of pronouns

× Yes, I think bikes are popular in our country because there are lots of youth that I am seeing on the road bicycling together with their friends and also bicycles.

✓ Yes, I think bikes are popular in our country because I see a lot of young people riding bicycles on the road with their friends.

The original sentence uses incorrect and awkward pronouns and noun forms: 'lots of youth that I am seeing' is unnatural. Use 'I see' for present observation (simple present) and 'a lot of young people' instead of 'lots of youth'. 'Bicycling together with their friends and also bicycles' is redundant and unclear; replace with 'riding bicycles on the road with their friends'. This corrects pronoun and noun usage and improves sentence clarity and grammaticality.

Từ vựng trọng tâm

Popular— Well-liked; Nonspecialist; Widespread; Mass
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