Part 1
Giám khảo
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Thí sinh
Yes, when I was a child. I have a back, uh, I really like bicycle cycling around our community after school. It's really make me happy and I can cycling with my friends.
Giám khảo
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Thí sinh
Yes, uh, I think most people uh, uh, write back for, for, for their routine because not every station, bus station or or underground station can.
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Điểm: 58.0Gợi ý: 问题回答要更自然、句子完整且避免填充词。首先用一句明确的主题句直接回答问题,例如“Yes, I did.” 然后用1–2句具体细节支持,注意时态一致(过去式),动词形式正确(have -> had;make -> made;cycling -> cycle 或 rode a bike)。可用连接词如“after that”或“with”将句子连贯起来。尽量控制在不超过5句,删除“uh”等口语填充。
Ví dụ: Yes, I did. I had a bicycle and I often rode it around our neighborhood after school. Riding made me really happy because I could explore nearby parks and play with my friends.
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Điểm: 44.0Gợi ý: 回答不够清晰且语法和词汇使用有误。先用一句直接回答,例如“Yes, I think so.” 然后用1–2句具体原因支持,使用准确词汇(例如“use bikes”或“ride bicycles”而不是“write back”),注意句子完整并避免重复填词。可以给出对比或具体例子,如“in small cities or suburbs people cycle to work”并使用连接词如“because”或“for example”。
Ví dụ: Yes, I think bikes are quite popular. Many people use bicycles for their daily commute, especially in smaller towns where public transport is limited, because buses and subway stations are not always convenient.
× Yes, when I was a child. I have a back, uh, I really like bicycle cycling around our community after school.
✓ Yes, when I was a child I had a bike. I really liked cycling around our community after school.
问题类型:句子结构与时态混用错误。原句中“You have a back”结构不完整且时态不一致,问句是过去时“Did you have...?”, 回答应使用过去时。并且“bicycle cycling”冗余,正确表达为“cycled”或“cycling”。建议:把回答统一为过去时,‘had a bike’替代‘have a back’,并使用‘liked cycling’或‘cycled’来表达过去经常做的动作。
× It's really make me happy and I can cycling with my friends.
✓ It really made me happy and I could cycle with my friends.
问题类型:动词形式与时态错误。‘It's really make’ 中动词形式错误且时态不符,应该用过去时的‘made’。‘I can cycling’ 中‘can’后应接动词原形,不能接动名词,应为‘I could cycle’(与过去时对齐)或‘I could cycle’。建议:将句子调整为过去时并使用正确的动词形式。
× Do you think bikes are popular in your country? Student: Yes, uh, I think most people uh, uh, write back for, for, for their routine because not every station, bus station or or underground station can.
✓ Yes, I think most people ride bikes for their routine, because not every bus stop or underground station is accessible.
问题类型:动词用法与拼写错误(第三人称单数/动词原形混淆)及介词与句子结构问题。原句中‘write back’应为‘ride bikes’或‘ride back’的拼写错误;另外‘station... can’结构不完整,缺少动词或形容词以表达“可到达/可用”。建议:把‘write back’改为‘ride bikes’,并把后半句改为完整表达,如‘not every bus stop or underground station is accessible’或‘not every station is convenient’。