Part 1
Giám khảo
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Thí sinh
Well, yeah, I had a bike when I was a child. My grandfather told me how to ride a bike. After I learned how to ride a bike, I went to school by bicycling. It was so exciting. I felt I grew up.
Giám khảo
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Thí sinh
Yeah, bicycles are popular in our country. I think China have the greatest number of people who are bicycling. But now things are better Gen.
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Điểm: 78.0Gợi ý: 回答自然且情感真切,但可改进细节和连贯性。建议:1) 开头直接作答后,可用一两句具体细节丰富内容(例如练习的地点、年龄或一次难忘的经历),避免泛泛而谈;2) 使用连接词使句子更流畅(例如“Then”、“After that”);3) 控制句子数量和长度,避免不必要重复;4) 注意时态和小语法(例如“bicycling”可换为更自然的“ride my bike to school”)。示例练习结构:一句主题句+1-2句具体细节+一句总结感受。
Ví dụ: Yes, I did. My grandfather taught me to ride when I was about seven, and I practiced in our small neighborhood park every afternoon. After I learned, I started riding my bike to school, which felt thrilling because it made me feel more independent and grown-up.
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Điểm: 60.0Gợi ý: 回答含义明确但语言不够准确且不够具体。建议:1) 注意语法一致性(例如“China have”应为“China has”或更自然的“many people in China cycle”);2) 提供具体原因或现象支持观点(例如城市共享单车、健身或环保等原因);3) 避免模糊或不完整的结尾(“But now things are better Gen.”不清楚,应阐明对比或变化);4) 使用连接词(例如“because”、“however”)使逻辑清晰。
Ví dụ: Yes, bikes are still quite popular in my country. Many people use bicycles or shared bikes for short trips because they are cheap and convenient, and cities have invested a lot in bike lanes recently, so cycling has become safer and more common.
× I think China have the greatest number of people who are bicycling.
✓ I think China has the greatest number of people who are bicycling.
问题类型:主谓一致错误(Subject-verb agreement)。句子主语 China 为单数名词,谓语动词应使用第三人称单数形式 has,而不是 have。建议:当主语是单数名词、国家名或单一实体时,动词用第三人称单数形式(has)。
× But now things are better Gen.
✓ But now things are better, Gen.
问题类型:现在时/句子结构问题(Present tense / Sentence structure)。原句中意思上没有明显时态错误,但缺少逗号使称呼与句子主干连接不自然;如果 'Gen' 是称呼,应与主句用逗号分隔。建议:在直接称呼听话人时,用逗号隔开称呼以使句子更自然。