Bike— Part 1 Báo cáo

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Part 1

Giám khảo

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

Thí sinh

Yes, I do have a bike when I was a kid.

Giám khảo

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

Thí sinh

Yes, of course. It's popular to our country, especially to the among children.

Đánh giá

Tổng

Tổng: 5.5Trôi chảy và mạch lạc: 5.5Phát âm: 5.5Ngữ pháp: 5.0Từ vựng: 5.5

Part 1

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

Điểm: 52.0

Gợi ý: Correct the tense and make the response more natural and concise. Start with a clear topic sentence in past tense, then add one brief supporting detail using a linking word. Avoid redundancy (e.g., 'do' with past time).

Ví dụ: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. In fact, I got it for my seventh birthday, and I used to ride it to school and around the neighborhood every day.

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

Điểm: 58.0

Gợi ý: Give a direct opinion and follow with specific reasons or examples using linking words. Use correct grammar (subject-verb agreement and prepositions) and avoid vague phrases. Keep it to a maximum of about 2–4 short sentences.

Ví dụ: Yes, bikes are very popular in my country, especially among children. For example, many families buy inexpensive bikes for short trips, and schools often encourage cycling by providing bike racks.

Ngữ pháp

Present tense issue

× Yes, I do have a bike when I was a kid.

✓ Yes, I had a bike when I was a kid.

The sentence mixes present simple 'do have' with past time expression 'when I was a kid.' Use past tense 'had' to match the past time reference. Suggestion: use 'had' for possession in the past or rephrase to present perfect if referring to experience (e.g., 'I have had a bike since I was a kid').

Incorrect use of pronouns

× Yes, of course. It's popular to our country, especially to the among children.

✓ Yes, of course. Bikes are popular in our country, especially among children.

Several issues: 'It's' incorrectly refers to 'bikes' (plural), so use plural subject 'Bikes are.' The preposition 'in' is correct for a country, not 'to.' The phrase 'to the among children' is ungrammatical; use 'among children.' Suggestion: use plural verb with plural noun ('Bikes are'), use 'in our country,' and 'among children' for distribution within a group.

Từ vựng trọng tâm

Popular— Well-liked; Nonspecialist; Widespread; Mass
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