Bike— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Speak in the past tense and give a clear topic sentence. Avoid fillers and repetition. Provide one or two specific supporting details using linking words (e.g., "because", "so"). For example say clearly whether you had a bike, why you didn’t, and mention any related experience or consequence.

Ví dụ: No, I didn’t have a bike when I was a child because my family couldn’t afford one. As a result, I usually walked to school and sometimes borrowed a neighbour’s bike on weekends.

Gợi ý: Start with a clear opinion sentence, use correct subject-verb agreement, and give specific reasons with linking words (e.g., "because", "so", "for example"). Use accurate vocabulary (e.g., "environmentally friendly", "good for health"). Keep it to 2–3 sentences maximum.

Ví dụ: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country because they are affordable and environmentally friendly. For example, many people cycle to work to save money and to stay healthy.

× As for me, no, I don't, uh, ride a bike, umm, when I a child because I can't, I I was can't ride and bike my childhood.

✓ No, I didn't. I didn't ride a bike when I was a child because I couldn't ride a bike during my childhood.

This sentence contains multiple errors that fit under sentence structure errors and tense problems: incorrect tense forms ('don't' should be past 'didn't'), missing verb 'was' in 'when I a child', incorrect modal/past form 'can't' should be 'couldn't', and awkward repetition. Suggestion: break into two clear sentences, use past tense for past situations: 'I didn't ride' and 'I couldn't'. Remove filler words and repetitions. Use 'during my childhood' or 'when I was a child' for clarity.

× Definitely the most people in the world rides and bikes because it is give a nature and it is help improve health healthy.

✓ Definitely most people in the world ride bikes because it gives them a chance to connect with nature and helps improve health.

Several issues: subject-verb agreement ('people' is plural so use 'ride', not 'rides'); unnecessary 'and' between verbs; incorrect verb forms and awkward phrases ('it is give a nature' should be 'it gives a chance to connect with nature'); 'it is help improve health healthy' mixes forms—use 'helps improve health' or 'is good for health'. Suggestion: use plural verb with plural subject, simplify clauses, and choose appropriate verb forms ('gives', 'helps') and nouns ('health').