Bike— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: В целом ответ хороший — он естественный, связный и даёт конкретные детали. Чтобы повысить оценку, сократите лёгкое повторение («I had a bike when I was a child» повторяется), используйте более точные временные маркеры и добавьте короткое связующее предложение для плавного перехода к деталям. Также можно добавить одно предложение с личной реакцией или результатом (например, чему вы научились или что вам особенно нравилось).

Ví dụ: Yes. I got my first bike for my fifth birthday from my father, and I used to ride it every evening around my hometown. Because of that daily practice, I became confident cycling on streets and often raced with neighborhood friends.

Gợi ý: Ответ понятен и аргументирован, но можно улучшить структуру: начните с чёткой краткой позиции, затем приведите два связанных и конкретных аргумента с примерами, используя связующие слова (for example, moreover, as a result). Избегайте чрезмерной совокупности причин в одном предложении — разбейте их на 2 предложения для ясности.

Ví dụ: I don't think so. Most people in my city prefer public transport because it is more convenient and feels safer. Moreover, there is little cycling infrastructure — for example, there are few bike lanes — so many people avoid riding bikes, especially during rush hour.

× I had a bike when I was a child, about 5 or 6 years old.

✓ I had a bike when I was a child, at about 5 or 6 years old.

The phrase 'about 5 or 6 years old' lacks a preposition; use 'at about' to indicate age. Подробно: нужно добавить предлог 'at' перед указанием возраста, чтобы фраза была грамматически корректной и звучала естественно. Suggestion: say 'at about 5 or 6 years old'.

× Well, I don't think so, because many people prefer public transport since they are more convenient and safer than cycling, and also our government has poor cycling infrastructure and more traffic.

✓ Well, I don't think so, because many people prefer public transport since it is more convenient and safer than cycling, and also our government has poor cycling infrastructure and there is more traffic.

Agreement and reference errors: 'public transport' is a singular uncountable noun and should be referred to with 'it' not 'they'. Also 'more traffic' needs an existential construction 'there is more traffic' to be grammatical in context. Подробно: замените 'they' на 'it' и добавьте 'there is' перед 'more traffic' для правильного построения предложения. Suggestion: use 'it is' for uncountable nouns and 'there is' to state existence of traffic.