Bike— Part 1 Báo cáo

Mô phỏngPart12026-07-04 01:36:02

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Part 1

Giám khảo

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

Thí sinh

Do you have a bike when you are child?

Giám khảo

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

Thí sinh

Do you think her bikes are popular in your city?

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Part 1

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

Điểm: 40.0

Gợi ý: 问题复述为现在时,且语法错误。回答时应直接用过去时陈述个人经历,开头用主题句,然后用一两句具体细节支持(例如什么时候、谁给的、常去哪里骑)。注意使用连接词使句子自然流畅。

Ví dụ: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. My parents bought it for me when I was seven, and I rode it every afternoon to visit my friends in the neighborhood. Because the streets were quiet, I felt safe and confident while learning to cycle.

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

Điểm: 35.0

Gợi ý: 学生把问题错误地改为第三人称并把范围从国家改成城市,且没有给出回答。回答时应直接表明观点(肯定或否定),接着用具体原因和例子支持,使用连接词(例如 because, for example, in addition)。保持不超过五句。

Ví dụ: Yes, I think bikes are quite popular in my country because many people use them for short trips and commuting. For example, in crowded cities bicycles are often faster than cars during rush hour, and many towns also have dedicated bike lanes and rental services.

Ngữ pháp

Incorrect tense and pronoun usage / Sentence structure errors

× Do you have a bike when you are child?

✓ Did you have a bike when you were a child?

问题涉及时态和代词用法不当。题目是过去时(询问童年),应使用过去式“Did you have”而不是现在时“Do you have”。同时“when you are child”中缺少不定冠词且时态不对,应改为过去时的“when you were a child”。建议:回忆过去时使用过去式助动词(did)和过去式动词;表示“一个孩子”用“a child”;代词时态要一致,过去时用“were”。

Incorrect pronoun use and unnecessary possessive / Sentence structure errors

× Do you think her bikes are popular in your city?

✓ Do you think bikes are popular in your city?

句子中出现了不必要的物主代词“her”,改变了原意并且语法不合适。原问题是询问自行车在城市中是否受欢迎,应使用泛指名词“bikes”。此外时态为一般现在时,原句的助动词和动词形式正确,但应去掉“her”。建议:当谈论一种事物的一般情况时,不用物主代词;保持主语与上下文一致。

Từ vựng trọng tâm

Popular— Well-liked; Nonspecialist; Widespread; Mass
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