Part 1
Giám khảo
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Thí sinh
Yes, I did.
Giám khảo
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Thí sinh
Yes, I think so, but because most of the people in my country ride back to school or go to work by the by bike.
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Điểm: 70.0Gợi ý: 回答简短直接但过于简单。应在主题句后补充具体细节(例如什么时候得到的、自行车的类型、使用频率或你记忆最深的一次骑车经历),并使用连接词使表达更流畅。注意控制在最多5句内,保持自然口语。
Ví dụ: Yes, I did. I got my first bike when I was seven — it was a small red mountain bike. I rode it almost every day around my neighborhood and learned to ride without training wheels within a week. That bike gave me a lot of freedom and happy memories.
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Điểm: 55.0Gợi ý: 句子有语法和表达不准确的问题,且信息重复。建议先给出直接判断,然后用1–2个具体原因和例子支持观点,注意语法(例如去掉多余的“by”并改正时态/冠词问题),使用连接词使逻辑更清晰。保持不超过5句。
Ví dụ: Yes, I think bikes are quite popular. In many cities people use bicycles to commute to work or school because they are cheap and convenient. For example, my sister cycles to university every day and often finds it faster than taking the bus.
× Yes, I think so, but because most of the people in my country ride back to school or go to work by the by bike.
✓ Yes, I think so, because most people in my country ride bikes to school or go to work by bike.
句子中存在多处介词和短语搭配不当的问题: 1) “ride back to school” 不符合英语习惯,正确表达是 “ride (bikes) to school” 表示“骑车去学校”。 2) “by the by bike” 是重复且错误的介词使用。表示交通工具时常用介词 “by” 加工具名词(不加冠词),如 “by bike”;也可以直接说 “ride bikes”。 3) “most of the people” 在此处更自然的表达是 “most people”。 改正建议: - 使用固定搭配 “ride (bikes) to school” 或 “go to work by bike”。 - 表示大多数人时可用 “most people” 而非冗长的 “most of the people”。 - 避免重复介词短语(如 “by the by bike”),并牢记交通工具前通常用 “by” + 不带冠词的名词(by car, by bus, by bike)。