Bike— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Votre réponse n'est pas claire et ne répond pas à la question. Vous avez donné une information sur un sac, pas sur un vélo. De plus, la grammaire est incorrecte (temps, accords) et la phrase est trop longue sans structure logique. Pour améliorer : 1) Répondez directement avec une phrase d'ouverture qui dit oui ou non; 2) Ajoutez une ou deux phrases de détails spécifiques (quel type de vélo, à quel âge, comment vous l'utilisiez); 3) Utilisez les temps correctement et évitez les erreurs d'accord; 4) Limitez-vous à maximum 3-4 phrases pour rester naturel.

Ví dụ: No, I didn’t have a bike when I was a child. Instead, I usually walked to school with my backpack. I started learning to ride a bike at age twelve and used it mainly for short rides in the park.

Gợi ý: Votre réponse contient des répétitions («I think in my opinion») et des erreurs d'accord et de précision («bike are», «everyone in Paris use»). De plus, l'argument est trop généralisé. Pour améliorer : 1) Évitez les redondances et commencez par une phrase claire; 2) Donnez des exemples précis ou des statistiques si possible (vélos en libre-service, pistes cyclables); 3) Utilisez la grammaire correcte (singulier/pluriel, temps); 4) Ajoutez une phrase de conséquence ou d'opinion pour enrichir la réponse.

Ví dụ: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country, especially in big cities like Paris. For instance, many people use public bike-sharing schemes and there are extensive bike lanes. As a result, cycling is often faster than driving during rush hour.

× I had a bag when I was a child and I use it to go to school.

✓ I had a bike when I was a child and I used it to go to school.

The sentence mixes past and present tense. The context is a past situation (when I was a child), so verbs should be in the past tense. 'Use' is present; change it to 'used'. Additionally, the student likely meant 'bike' rather than 'bag' given the examiner's question. Suggestion: keep all verbs consistent in past tense when describing past events and ensure the correct noun (bike) is used to match the question.

× I think in my opinion that bike are popular in my country as everyone in Paris use a bike to go at their office.

✓ I think that bikes are popular in my country because everyone in Paris uses a bike to go to their office.

Multiple issues: subject-verb agreement ('bike are' should be plural 'bikes are'); redundancy ('I think in my opinion' is repetitive — use one phrase); verb agreement with 'everyone' requires singular verb 'uses'; incorrect preposition 'go at their office' should be 'go to their office'; use 'because' rather than 'as' for clarity. Suggestions: use 'I think that' or 'In my opinion' (not both), make nouns and verbs agree in number, use singular verbs with 'everyone', and use correct prepositions ('to' for destination).