Bike— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Be accurate, relevant and grammatically correct. Start with a clear topic sentence that answers the question (e.g. yes or no), use correct past tense, and avoid unrelated words (you said “bag” instead of “bike”). Give one or two specific supporting details using linking words (for example, because, so, or and). Keep it concise (no more than 4–5 short sentences).

Ví dụ: Yes, I did. I had a small brown bike when I was a child because my parents bought it for me on my seventh birthday. It had a comfortable seat and a basket on the front, so I used it to ride to my friend’s house and around the neighborhood.

Gợi ý: Answer directly, give clear reasons with specific examples, and use appropriate linking words. Begin with a topic sentence (e.g. Yes, they are popular), then add 1–2 specific reasons (cost, health, traffic) and an example or comparison. Use correct pronouns and concise phrasing; avoid vague phrases like “for me to like it.”

Ví dụ: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country because they are cheap to run and help people avoid traffic. For example, many students and commuters cycle to school or work, which also keeps them fit and saves money on fuel.

× I have a bag.

✓ I had a bag.

The question asks about possession in childhood (past). The student used present tense 'have' which is inconsistent. Change to past tense 'had' to match the time frame: 'I had a bag.' Suggestion: use past-tense verbs when describing past events.

× I had a bag when I were a child and the color was brown.

✓ I had a bag when I was a child and the color was brown.

The subject 'I' requires the verb form 'was' in past tense, not 'were'. 'Were' is used with plural subjects or in subjunctive mood. Replace 'were' with 'was' for correct subject-verb agreement.

× It was very pretty, so I liked it. I like it.

✓ It was very pretty, so I liked it.

The student mixes past ('was', 'liked') and present ('I like it') when describing a past possession. Because the item is being discussed in the past, keep verbs in past tense. Remove 'I like it' or change it to 'I liked it' to maintain consistent past narration.

× Yeah, I think definitely because it is very useful for me to like it and we can move our body easily.

✓ Yeah, I think so, definitely, because it is very useful for us and we can move our bodies easily.

Several issues: 'I think definitely' is awkward—'I think so, definitely' is natural. 'Useful for me to like it' is incorrect phrasing; the student likely means 'useful for us' or 'useful to me'. Also 'we can move our body easily' should use plural 'bodies' when referring to people in general. Suggestions: simplify to 'I think so, definitely, because it is very useful for us and we can move our bodies easily.'

× And yeah, that's the reason.

✓ And yeah, that's the reason.

This sentence is grammatically acceptable, but ensure it follows a corrected previous sentence for clarity. No grammatical change is necessary.