Bike— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Be more concise, correct grammar and tenses, and reduce fillers. Start with a clear topic sentence, then give one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Avoid repetition and use correct past tense forms.

Ví dụ: No, I didn't have a bike as a young child because in my hometown children were not allowed to ride them. However, when I became a teenager my father bought me a bike, and I used it often to visit friends and run small errands.

Gợi ý: Give a direct opinion with clearer reasons and correct grammar. Use linking words (for example, therefore, because) and provide a specific example or comparison to support your point.

Ví dụ: Yes, bikes are very popular in my country because they are practical in crowded cities. For example, commuters often use bicycles to avoid traffic jams, so they can usually arrive at work faster than those who drive.

× Actually, to be honest, umm, where I'm from there is not allowed to ride a bike when you're a child.

✓ Actually, to be honest, umm, where I'm from it is not allowed to ride a bike when you're a child.

The original sentence misplaces the dummy subject in a 'there is' construction. Use 'it is not allowed' to refer to a general rule in that place. Also consider rephrasing to 'it is not allowed for children to ride bikes' for clarity.

× So that's the reason I never have a bike when I was a kid.

✓ So that's the reason I never had a bike when I was a kid.

The sentence refers to a past timeframe ('when I was a kid') so the verb should be in the past tense. Change 'have' to 'had' to match the past context.

× But yeah, when I come to the teenage that my dad bought a bike for me.

✓ But yeah, when I became a teenager my dad bought a bike for me.

The phrase 'come to the teenage' is ungrammatical. Use 'became a teenager' to express entering that age. Also ensure tense consistency: 'became' (past) matches 'bought' (past). Remove unnecessary 'that'.

× In my country there is a lot of population, so people like to ride bikes because it's good in the traffic.

✓ In my country there is a large population, so people like to ride bikes because they are good in traffic.

'A lot of population' is incorrect; use 'a large population' or 'a lot of people.' Also the pronoun should agree: 'they are good in traffic' refers to bikes. Alternatively, say 'bikes are good for getting around in traffic.' Adjust article and preposition use.

× You can reached on your destination on time even if there is a traffic or not.

✓ You can reach your destination on time even if there is traffic or not.

After modal 'can' use the base form 'reach', not the past participle 'reached.' Also say 'there is traffic' (no article) and use 'reach your destination' without 'on' before destination. The clause 'even if there is traffic or not' is slightly informal; better: 'whether there is traffic or not.'