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Part 1

Giám khảo

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

Thí sinh

Certainly, Yeah, You know, uh, when I was a kid, I have two bags and both of them are wore black and I really liked to riding them down the lake to kill my spare time.

Giám khảo

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

Thí sinh

Surely it's very popular in China. I can always see a lot of people riding the shared bikes when they are commuting to company or go to going to the school. And at the same time, on the Internet a lot of people share their favorite bikes.

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Part 1

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

Điểm: 52.0

Gợi ý: 用更自然且语法正确的句子直接回答问题,避免无谓填充词(如 uh, you know)。句子时态和名词单复数要一致;用具体细节(比如骑车的地点、频率或感受)来丰富答案,并使用连接词使句子连贯。保持回答不超过5句。

Ví dụ: Yes, I did. I had two bicycles when I was a child, both of which were black. I often rode them around the lake near my home to relax after school. Riding helped me pass the time and feel free. I especially enjoyed racing with my friends on weekends.

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

Điểm: 64.0

Gợi ý: 回答要更流畅并修正语法错误(主谓一致、固定搭配)。使用具体例子和连接词(for example, moreover, because)来支持观点,避免重复表述。可提及频率、场景或数据以增强说服力,控制在最多5句内。

Ví dụ: Yes, bikes are very popular in China. For example, many people use shared bikes to commute to work or school in big cities. Moreover, cycling is commonly promoted as a convenient and affordable way to travel short distances. As a result, you can often see crowded bike racks and many bike-sharing apps in use.

Ngữ pháp

Present tense issue

× Certainly, Yeah, You know, uh, when I was a kid, I have two bags and both of them are wore black and I really liked to riding them down the lake to kill my spare time.

Certainly. Yeah. You know, when I was a kid, I had two bikes and both of them were black, and I really liked riding them down to the lake to kill my spare time.

问题类型: Present tense issue(现在时使用错误)和 Past tense issue(过去时使用错误)以及 Verb + -ing form(动词+ -ing)和 Incorrect use of nouns(名词使用错误)。 解释(简体中文):原句中时态与叙述背景(过去)不一致:说“when I was a kid”(过去),但用了现在时“have”,应改为过去时“had”。“both of them are wore black”包含动词时态和被动/形容词使用错误:应为“were black”(形容词作表语,过去时)。“liked to riding”中动词短语形式错误,动词“like”后可接动名词或不带介词的不定式,但不能是“to riding”;常见表达是“liked riding”或“liked to ride”。另外“two bags”应为“two bikes”(名词错误,原意为自行车)。建议:保持时态一致(过去叙述用过去时),用正确的名词(bike),形容颜色用be动词+形容词(were black),动词短语用“liked riding”或“liked to ride”。

Incorrect use of prepositions

× Surely it's very popular in China. I can always see a lot of people riding the shared bikes when they are commuting to company or go to going to the school.

Surely, it's very popular in China. I can always see a lot of people riding shared bikes when they are commuting to work or going to school.

问题类型: Incorrect use of prepositions(介词/短语使用错误)和 Verb tense/form issues(动词形式错误)。 解释(简体中文):原句中“commuting to company”不自然,英语中常说“commuting to work”或“commuting to the company”;“go to going to the school”包含冗余和动词形式错误,应为“going to school”。另外“the shared bikes”在泛指时可省略定冠词,改为“shared bikes”。建议:使用固定搭配“commute to work/commute to the company”,去掉多余的词并保持动词形式一致(“going to school”)。

Incorrect use of pronouns

× And at the same time, on the Internet a lot of people share their favorite bikes.

And at the same time, on the Internet, a lot of people share their favorite bikes.

问题类型: Incorrect use of pronouns(代词使用问题)——虽然代词本身“their”是正确的,但句子缺少必要的逗号以提高可读性,且更自然的顺序是把“on the Internet”放在句中或句首。简体中文解释:原句语法上并无大的代词错误,但标点和词序会影响表达的自然度。建议:在“on the Internet”前后加逗号或调整位置,使句子更清晰自然。

Từ vựng trọng tâm

PopularWell-liked; Nonspecialist; Widespread; Mass
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