Bike— Part 1 Báo cáo

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Part 1

Giám khảo

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

Thí sinh

Yes, I have back on where I were a child. Umm, this bike gave me my parents in my birthday.

Giám khảo

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

Thí sinh

Sure, I think the bikes are popular in my country because I I'm seeing the bikes every day.

Đánh giá

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Tổng: 5.5Trôi chảy và mạch lạc: 5.5Phát âm: 5.5Ngữ pháp: 5.0Từ vựng: 5.5

Part 1

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

Điểm: 42.0

Gợi ý: Сформулируйте ответ грамматически правильно, используйте простое и прямое предложение для темы, затем добавьте одно-два уточняющих предложения с конкретными деталями (когда вы получили велосипед, какие воспоминания связаны). Избегайте заполнителей вроде «umm» и ошибок в временах и порядке слов. Также сократите ответ до не более 3–4 предложений.

Ví dụ: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. My parents bought it for my birthday when I was seven, and I used it to ride to the park every afternoon. I remember feeling very proud when I learned to ride without training wheels.

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

Điểm: 48.0

Gợi ý: Дайте прямой ответ (Yes/No), затем объясните причину и приведите конкретный пример или наблюдение. Исправьте грамматику (уберите лишние слова, правильно используйте времена) и используйте связующие слова (for example, because, therefore). Удерживайтесь от повторов и говорите уверенно.

Ví dụ: Yes, I think bicycles are very popular in my country because many people use them for short trips and commuting. For example, I see cyclists on the road and in parks every day, and many cities have bike lanes and rental schemes.

Ngữ pháp

Incorrect use of tense and pronouns, Subject-verb agreement, Article errors

× Yes, I have back on where I were a child. Umm, this bike gave me my parents in my birthday.

✓ Yes, I had one when I was a child. This bike was given to me by my parents for my birthday.

Errors: incorrect tense and verb forms (use past tense 'had' and 'was' for past time), subject-verb agreement ('were' should be 'was' with singular subject 'I'), incorrect word order and phrasing ('have back on where I were a child' is ungrammatical), passive voice and preposition use ('gave me my parents in my birthday' should be passive or restructured: 'was given to me by my parents for my birthday'). Suggestions: use simple past for past experiences, use correct subject-verb agreement with 'I was', use 'given to me by' to show who gave the item and 'for my birthday' to indicate occasion.

Present tense issue, Verb form and auxiliary misuse

× Sure, I think the bikes are popular in my country because I I'm seeing the bikes every day.

✓ Sure, I think bikes are popular in my country because I see them every day.

Errors: unnecessary definite article 'the' before 'bikes' when speaking generally; incorrect present continuous 'I'm seeing' which is not used for habitual actions—use simple present 'I see'; pronoun reference 'the bikes' repeated awkwardly—use 'them'. Suggestions: use simple present for habitual facts, omit 'the' when referring to things in general, and replace 'I'm seeing the bikes every day' with 'I see them every day' for clarity.

Từ vựng trọng tâm

Back— Rear; Reverse; Backward
Popular— Well-liked; Nonspecialist; Widespread; Mass
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