Bike— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Be more concise and natural: begin with a direct topic sentence, then add one or two specific supporting details (why you liked it or how you used it). Avoid unnecessary words (e.g. don’t say both “did” and “have” in that position). Keep to under five sentences and use linking words if you add details.

Ví dụ: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. It was a small four‑wheeled bike that made me feel steady and confident, so I rode it every afternoon around our neighborhood.

Gợi ý: Answer the question directly and stay on topic (bikes). Avoid unrelated words/typos (e.g., “bags”). Provide a clear opinion, then one specific reason and an example using linking words. Use correct grammar and singular/plural forms (“electric scooters are popular among people aged 15 and above”). Keep it within five sentences.

Ví dụ: Not really — traditional bicycles are less common in my country. Instead, electric scooters have become popular, especially among people aged 15 and older, because they are affordable and convenient for short urban trips.

× It was a four wheeled bike.

✓ It was a four-wheeled bike.

The problem is a compound adjective describing the bike; hyphenation is needed but the main grammar category from the list is singular/plural because 'four wheeled' is treated as a single modifier for a singular noun. Use a hyphen to form the compound adjective 'four-wheeled'. Also ensure 'four-wheeled' modifies the singular noun 'bike'. Suggestion: write compound modifiers with a hyphen before a noun (four-wheeled bike).

× No, in my country bags are not popular.

✓ No, in my country bikes are not popular.

This sentence likely contains a wrong noun rather than a strict grammar error: 'bags' is incorrect given the question about bikes. The issue fits the singular/plural category because the noun should match the context. Replace 'bags' with the plural 'bikes' to answer the question appropriately. Suggestion: check that the noun used matches the topic and use the correct plural form when talking about general popularity (bikes are).

× But if we're talking about vehicles in general, electrical scooter have been popular from age to 15 and above have been using it.

✓ But if we're talking about vehicles in general, electric scooters have been popular among people aged 15 and above.

Multiple issues here: 'electrical scooter' has wrong form and number — use the plural 'electric scooters' (singular/plural issue). Also 'have been popular from age to 15 and above have been using it' is ungrammatical and unclear. Rephrase to 'popular among people aged 15 and above' to express the intended meaning. Use 'electric' not 'electrical' when describing scooters, and match plural verb agreement with the plural subject 'scooters'. Suggestion: use correct adjective 'electric', plural noun 'scooters', and a clear phrase for age groups ('people aged 15 and above').