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Part 1

Giám khảo

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

Thí sinh

Yes I did. Umm, I had a blue bike when I was a student. I rode it to my school every day with my friends.

Giám khảo

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

Thí sinh

Yes, of course we can see that there is a lot of people ride bicycles in the village, even in the city. It is really convenient, especially when the city is in a traffic jam.

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Part 1

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

Điểm: 78.0

Gợi ý: 回答总体清楚但可更自然、简洁并提供少量具体细节。注意减少“umm”类填充词,第一句可直接给出主题句,然后用一到两句补充具体细节(比如骑行距离、感受或与朋友的互动),句子不超过五句以保持流畅。可适当使用连接词如“so”或“and”来衔接细节。

Ví dụ: Yes, I did. I had a blue bike that I used to ride to school every day with my friends. The journey took about ten minutes, and we often raced each other on the way, which made the trip fun and kept me active.

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

Điểm: 72.0

Gợi ý: 回答观点明确但语法和词汇使用有误且表达略显笼统。应注意主谓一致(a lot of people ride)、更自然的搭配(riding bicycles/widespread)以及使用连接词来展开原因或举例。增加一两个具体例子或对比(比如村庄与城市的不同用途)能使回答更具体、有说服力。

Ví dụ: Yes, I think bicycles are quite popular in my country. In villages many people ride them for short trips, while in cities people use bikes to avoid traffic jams and save money, so cycling remains a common and practical choice.

Ngữ pháp

Singular and plural issue

× Yes, of course we can see that there is a lot of people ride bicycles in the village, even in the city.

Yes, of course we can see that a lot of people ride bicycles in the village, even in the city.

问题类型:可数名词单复数/数量表达错误。原句中使用了结构“there is a lot of people”,但“a lot of people”是复数,所以不应使用单数存在结构“there is”。应改为“a lot of people”并且将句子调整为主语+谓语结构(或使用“there are a lot of people”)。建议:遇到表示很多人的短语时,注意搭配复数动词或使用“there are”。此处最自然的表达是“a lot of people ride...”或“There are a lot of people who ride...”。

Incorrect use of prepositions

× It is really convenient, especially when the city is in a traffic jam.

It is really convenient, especially when there is a traffic jam in the city.

问题类型:介词/短语使用不当与句子结构问题。原句“the city is in a traffic jam”结构不自然,英文里通常说“there is a traffic jam”或“the city is experiencing a traffic jam”,并把“in the city”放在合适位置。建议:使用常见表达“there is a traffic jam in the city”或“when the city is experiencing traffic jams”。

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