Bike— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Your answer is relevant and gives personal details, but it is somewhat repetitive, has minor grammatical errors, and lacks clear sentence structure. To improve, start with a concise topic sentence, avoid repetition, correct tense/word choice (e.g., "training bike" -> "training wheels" or "balance bike"), and use one or two supporting details connected with linking words (for example: "and," "because," "so"). Also correct awkward phrases like "hold with my brother" and reduce redundancy ("we had a… and a…"). Aim for 2–4 well-formed sentences under the five-sentence limit.

Ví dụ: Yes. I had both a small bike with training wheels and a larger bicycle when I was a child. My siblings and I often rode around our neighborhood, and I learned to ride the bigger bike with my brother, which sometimes resulted in scrapes and bruises. Those rides helped me become more confident on two wheels.

Gợi ý: Your answer addresses the question and provides a trend, but it contains hesitation, repetition, and unclear wording. To improve, deliver a clear topic sentence stating your view, then add one or two specific supporting details (e.g., reasons for growing popularity, examples like bike lanes, group rides, or bike-sharing programs). Use linking words ("because," "for example," "so") and avoid filler sounds or repeated words. Keep sentences concise and grammatically correct.

Ví dụ: I think cycling is becoming much more popular in my country now. For example, many cities have introduced dedicated bike lanes and bike‑sharing programs, and local cycling clubs organize regular group rides, which has encouraged more people to use bikes for commuting and exercise.

× We had a we had both a small training bike and a larger bicycle when I was a child and my siblings and I would ride around our subdivision.

✓ We had both a small training bike and a larger bicycle when I was a child, and my siblings and I used to ride around our subdivision.

The original sentence repeats 'we had a we had' (redundant phrase) and uses 'would ride' which is acceptable but 'used to ride' fits better for habitual past actions and is clearer. Remove the duplicate words and add a comma before the coordinating conjunction for readability.

× I remember learning to ride the larger one with my brother, hold with my brother and I would get scratches.

✓ I remember learning to ride the larger one with my brother, and I would get scratches.

The phrase 'hold with my brother' is ungrammatical and likely a fragment. Also 'my brother and I would get scratches' implies both got scratches; if only the speaker did, use 'I would get scratches.' The corrected sentence removes the unclear fragment and uses 'and' to connect clauses correctly.

× Bikes weren't, uh, weren't very popular in my country a few a few years ago, but they're becoming more much more common now.

✓ Bikes weren't very popular in my country a few years ago, but they're becoming much more common now.

The original has repetitions ('weren't, uh, weren't' and 'a few a few') and 'more much more' is redundant. Remove duplicates and keep 'becoming much more common' to express increasing popularity in the present progressive.

× There's a growing cycle community which the which cycles around the city and do this courses as a group, which ha, which.

✓ There's a growing cycling community that cycles around the city and does these courses as a group.

Several problems: 'which the which' is repetitive and ungrammatical; 'cycle community' should be 'cycling community' (noun form); verb agreement: 'community' is singular so use 'does' not 'do'; 'this courses' is incorrect determiner/number — use 'these courses.' The corrected sentence fixes word choice, removes fillers, and ensures subject-verb agreement.