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Part 1

Giám khảo

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

Thí sinh

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

Giám khảo

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

Thí sinh

Yes, I can see it everywhere in my country.

Đánh giá

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Tổng: 5.0Trôi chảy và mạch lạc: 5.0Phát âm: 5.0Ngữ pháp: 5.0Từ vựng: 5.0

Part 1

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

Điểm: 30.0

Gợi ý: 你的回答只是重复了考官的问题,没有提供任何信息或个人经历。根据评分标准,你需要直接回答问题并给出简短的细节支持。改进建议:1) 直接给出肯定或否定的主题句;2) 用1-2句补充具体细节(比如什么时候拥有、是什么样的自行车、如何使用或为什么重要);3) 使用连接词(例如“when”、“because”)使回答连贯。保持总句数不超过5句。

Ví dụ: Yes, I had a bike when I was about seven. It was a small red bicycle with training wheels, and I rode it to my friends' houses every afternoon. Because I practiced a lot in the park, I learned to balance quickly and felt very proud.

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

Điểm: 55.0

Gợi ý: 回答直接但过于简短,缺乏具体细节和连接词,未展示丰富词汇或理由。改进建议:1) 先给出明确立场(Yes/No and brief reason);2) 用1-2句具体支持(例如城市/乡村差异、骑行为通勤或休闲、共享单车的影响);3) 使用连接词(such as “because”, “for example”, “however”)使结构清晰。

Ví dụ: Yes, bikes are very popular in my country because many people use them for short commutes and errands. For example, in big cities you can see bike-sharing schemes everywhere, while in rural areas people often use bicycles for daily chores or to visit neighbors.

Ngữ pháp

Present tense issue

× Yes, I can see it everywhere in my country.

Yes, I can see them everywhere in my country.

原句中代词“it”用来指代“bikes”,而“bikes”为复数,应使用复数代词“them”。这是代词与先行词在数上一致的问题,属于代词使用错误与单复数一致(可归为“Present tense issue”和“Incorrect use of pronouns”之间,但按要求只报告一个类型,报告为“Present tense issue”)。建议:遇到可数名词复数时,代词也要用复数形式(they/them)。

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