Bike— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Your answer is understandable but contains grammar errors, unclear words, and irrelevant or mistranslated phrases. Give a clear topic sentence, correct tense and pronouns, and add one specific detail using a linking word. Keep it natural and concise (no more than 4–5 sentences).

Ví dụ: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. I often rode it with my parents to nearby villages, such as Sai Kung, on weekends. Because the roads were quiet, we felt safe and enjoyed the fresh air. Those rides are one of my fondest childhood memories.

Gợi ý: Your idea is relevant but phrasing and coherence need improvement. Start with a clear topic sentence, then add specific supporting details with linking words (for example, reason or examples). Avoid unrelated place names unless you explain them. Use correct verb forms and articles.

Ví dụ: Yes, bicycles are quite popular in my country. For example, many people use bikes to do daily shopping or to commute to work because it is cheap and convenient. In some cities, like Seville, there are even dedicated bike lanes that make cycling safer and more attractive.

× Yes, I have a body.

✓ Yes, I had one.

The question asked about having a bike when the student was a child (past). The original sentence 'I have a body' uses present tense and the wrong noun. Change to past tense 'had' and a proper noun 'one' referring to 'a bike'. Use past tense to match the time frame. Suggestion: Use past-tense verbs for experiences in the past (e.g., 'I had a bike').

× When I was a child I always riding my bike with my parents.

✓ When I was a child, I always rode my bike with my parents.

This sentence describes a habitual action in the past so the simple past tense 'rode' is required rather than the present participle 'riding'. Also add a comma after the introductory clause for clarity. Suggestion: For repeated past actions use simple past (subject + past verb), e.g., 'I always rode'.

× Go to Saikong or Typo to pay out the door.

✓ We went to Saikong or Typo and rode out of town.

The fragment lacks a subject and verb and uses incorrect wording 'pay out the door'. To describe traveling to places as a child, use a complete past-tense clause with a subject ('we') and a clear verb phrase. 'Rode out of town' or 'rode to the countryside' convey the intended meaning. Suggestion: Use complete sentences with a subject and correct verbs; choose accurate prepositions (e.g., 'went to', 'rode to').

× Yes, normally people always ride their bicycle to buy something for their daily life or ride their bicycle go to work.

✓ Yes, normally people ride their bicycles to buy daily necessities or to go to work.

The original mixes adverbs redundantly ('normally' and 'always') and omits 'to' before 'go to work'. Use plural 'bicycles' for general statements and 'buy daily necessities' is a natural collocation. Remove redundancy and ensure infinitive 'to go' is present. Suggestion: For general facts use present simple (people ride), use plural where appropriate, and include necessary prepositions/infinitives (e.g., 'to go').

× Hotspots Seville and Cordoba.

✓ Popular places include Seville and Cordoba.

This fragment lacks a verb and is not a full sentence. To express that those cities are popular, provide a complete clause with a verb. Also 'hotspots' is informal; 'popular places' or 'popular cities' fits better. Suggestion: Use full sentences with a subject and verb (e.g., 'Popular places include Seville and Cordoba').