BikePart 1 Báo cáo

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Part 1

Giám khảo

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

Thí sinh

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

Giám khảo

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

Thí sinh

I do not think bikes are popular in my country as my country is crowded with people and roads are usually narrowed. There are lots of space for us to have bikes for convenience and safety.

Đánh giá

Tổng

Tổng: 6.0Trôi chảy và mạch lạc: 6.0Phát âm: 6.0Ngữ pháp: 6.0Từ vựng: 6.0

Part 1

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

Điểm: 30.0

Gợi ý: Your answer simply repeated the examiner’s question instead of responding. In Part 1 you should give a clear, direct answer (yes/no) plus one or two brief supporting details. Keep it natural, up to 3–4 short sentences, and use linking words if you add information.

Ví dụ: Yes, I did. I got my first bike when I was six and used it to ride around the neighborhood with friends. Because our street was quiet, I learned to ride quickly and spent most afternoons cycling until dinner.

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

Điểm: 55.0

Gợi ý: Your answer addresses the question but has some logical inconsistency and grammar issues. Start with a clear direct opinion, then give two specific reasons with connectors (for example, because / however). Be concise (max 4–5 short sentences) and correct word choice (e.g. “narrow” not “narrowed”, and “not much space” instead of “lots of space”).

Ví dụ: No, I don’t think bikes are very popular in my country because many cities are crowded and roads are narrow. As a result, cycling can feel unsafe in traffic. However, some people still ride bikes for short trips or exercise, especially where there are bike lanes.

Ngữ pháp

Present tense issue

× I do not think bikes are popular in my country as my country is crowded with people and roads are usually narrowed.

I do not think bikes are popular in my country because my country is crowded with people and the roads are usually narrow.

The sentence uses present tense correctly but has issues with word choice and article use. 'As' can mean 'because' but 'because' is clearer here. 'Roads are usually narrowed' is incorrect: 'narrowed' is a past participle implying an action; the intended meaning is a descriptive adjective, so use 'narrow'. Add the definite article 'the' before 'roads' to refer to roads in the country in general. Suggestion: replace 'as' with 'because', change 'roads are usually narrowed' to 'the roads are usually narrow'.

Singular and plural issue

× There are lots of space for us to have bikes for convenience and safety.

There is lot of space for us to have bikes for convenience and safety.

The original has a subject-verb agreement and countability problem. 'Lots of' requires a plural noun (lots of spaces) or use singular uncountable 'a lot of space'. The correct forms are either 'There is a lot of space' or 'There are lots of spaces'. Because 'space' is generally uncountable here, use 'There is a lot of space'. Also 'for us to have bikes' is acceptable, but could be 'for us to use bikes' for clarity. Suggestion: use 'There is a lot of space' or 'There are lots of spaces'.

Từ vựng trọng tâm

CrowdedPacked
PopularWell-liked; Nonspecialist; Widespread; Mass
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