BikePart 1 Báo cáo

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Part 1

Giám khảo

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

Thí sinh

No, I don't have.

Giám khảo

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

Thí sinh

I think. Maybe and the girl, but boy, no.

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Tổng: 5.0Trôi chảy và mạch lạc: 5.0Phát âm: 5.0Ngữ pháp: 5.0Từ vựng: 5.0

Part 1

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

Điểm: 25.0

Gợi ý: حاول أن تستخدم زمنًا صحيحًا وتقدم إجابة كاملة وواضحة. ابدأ بجملة موضوعية توضح الوضع في الماضي (مثلاً: لا، لم أكن أملك دراجة) ثم أضف سببًا أو تفصيلاً قصيرًا مرتبطًا (مثلاً: لأننا كنا نسكن في مدينة مزدحمة أو لأن والديّ لم يسمحا). استخدم 2–4 جمل كحد أقصى وتجنب الأخطاء الزمنية.

Ví dụ: No, I didn’t have a bike when I was a child. My family lived in a busy city, so my parents preferred that I walked or used public transport. I sometimes borrowed a friend’s bike to ride in the park.

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

Điểm: 30.0

Gợi ý: كن أكثر وضوحًا وتنظيمًا عند التعبير عن رأيك. ابدأ بجملة مباشرة توضح رأيك العام (نعم أو لا أو إلى حد ما)، ثم ادعم رأيك بتفاصيل محددة مثل من يركب الدراجة وأين ولماذا. استخدم أدوات ربط بسيطة مثل 'because', 'for example' أو 'however' لتوضيح العلاقة بين الأفكار.

Ví dụ: I think bikes are somewhat popular in my country, especially among girls and young people. For example, many girls use bikes to travel short distances or for exercise, but fewer boys use them because they prefer motorbikes. However, cycling is more common in parks and university areas.

Ngữ pháp

Present tense issue

× No, I don't have.

No, I didn't.

The question uses past tense 'Did you have...?', so the answer must also be in past tense. The student used present tense 'do/n't' which is inconsistent. Use the past tense auxiliary 'did' with the base verb: 'I didn't (have a bike).' Also it's more complete to say 'No, I didn't have one.'

Sentence structure errors

× I think. Maybe and the girl, but boy, no.

I think they are popular among girls, but not among boys.

The original is fragmented and lacks clear subjects and verbs. Use a complete sentence with a subject ('they' referring to bikes), verb ('are popular'), and a clear contrast: 'among girls' vs 'among boys.' This fixes sentence structure and makes the meaning clear.

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