Bike— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Be clear and direct. Start with a simple topic sentence that answers the question, then give one or two specific supporting details in clear sentences. Avoid irrelevant or incorrect words (e.g. 'boyfriend') and repeated phrases. Use correct tense and simple linking words (e.g. 'but', 'when'). Try to keep to under five sentences.

Ví dụ: No, I didn’t have a bike when I was very young. However, when I was in class six I got my first bike, which I used to ride to school every day. It was a simple, second-hand bicycle but I loved it because it gave me independence.

Gợi ý: Answer directly and give specific reasons or examples. Use correct grammar (plural forms, word order) and linking words to connect ideas (e.g. 'because', 'for example'). Provide one or two concrete reasons why bikes are popular and keep sentences concise.

Ví dụ: Yes, I do. Bikes have become very popular in my country because they are cheap and convenient for short journeys. For example, many students and workers prefer bicycles to avoid traffic and save money on transport.

× No, I didn't didn't have a boyfriend.

✓ No, I didn't have a bike.

The student used the past negative auxiliary 'didn't' twice and used 'boyfriend' instead of 'bike' (likely a mistake). Use a single 'didn't' plus base verb: 'didn't have'. Ensure the noun matches the question (bike). Remove the repeated auxiliary to correct past tense negative form.

× I am child but when I was in class 6 then I got my then I was got my bike is a is a life 1312.

✓ I was a child, but when I was in class 6 I got my bike; it was a very important part of my life.

The original sentence has broken structure, incorrect verb forms ('was got'), repetition, and unclear phrases ('is a life 1312'). Correct structure: use past simple 'I was' for being a child and 'I got' for receiving the bike. Remove repetitions and clarify the idea by saying 'it was an important part of my life.' Use punctuation to separate clauses.

× Yes I do.

✓ Yes, I do.

Add a comma after 'Yes' for punctuation. The tense is acceptable (present simple) to answer the question about general belief. No tense change required.

× Nowadays in my country many areas are encouraged to ride a bike.

✓ Nowadays in my country many people are encouraged to ride bikes.

The phrase 'many areas are encouraged' is illogical because areas cannot be encouraged; people can. Also use plural 'bikes' or 'to ride a bicycle' for general meaning. Keep passive 'are encouraged' if you want to emphasize the people being encouraged.

× Many of young people are want bike, they are in their life.

✓ Many young people want bikes; they are part of their lives.

'Many of young people' is incorrect; use 'many young people'. Use correct verb form 'want' (not 'are want'). Use plural 'bikes' and correct phrase 'part of their lives' instead of 'they are in their life'. This fixes quantifier, subject-verb agreement, and noun number.