Bike— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Your answer is somewhat contradictory and wordy. You first say you didn’t have a bicycle, then say your parents gave you one and you explored the neighborhood. This confuses the examiner. Keep the response direct: state the fact clearly, briefly explain why, and add one specific detail. Use linking words to connect ideas and limit to 2–3 sentences.

Ví dụ: No, I didn’t have a bike for most of my childhood because my parents were quite strict about safety. However, when I was ten they bought me a small bicycle, and I loved riding it around the neighborhood every weekend.

Gợi ý: Pronunciation and vocabulary errors ("Bites", "car") and some grammar mistakes weaken clarity. Start with a clear topic sentence, then give a specific reason and an example. Use linking words (because, for example, therefore) and correct noun forms. Keep it within 2–3 concise sentences.

Ví dụ: Yes, bicycles are very popular in my country because many families cannot afford cars. For example, in my city most students and market vendors use bikes for short trips, which makes them a practical and economical choice.

× No, I didn't have a bicycle during my childhood because my parents were quite strict about it. Instead, they gave me a bicycle and I explored my whole neighborhood with the bicycle and I loved it as a gift.

✓ No, I didn't have a bicycle during my childhood because my parents were quite strict about it. Instead, they gave me a bicycle, and I explored my whole neighborhood with it; I loved it as a gift.

The original sentence repeats the noun 'bicycle' unnecessarily and uses 'the bicycle' where the pronoun 'it' is more natural. Also, two independent clauses were joined without proper punctuation. Use a pronoun to avoid repetition and add a comma or semicolon before the coordinating conjunction joining independent clauses. This improves cohesion and fluency. Suggestion: Replace repeated nouns with appropriate pronouns and separate independent clauses with a comma + conjunction or a semicolon.

× Bites are usually popular in my country because many people cannot afford car in our country, so I think they tend to buy bikes more often. And yeah, it's a popular vehicle.

✓ Bikes are usually popular in my country because many people cannot afford cars, so I think they tend to buy bikes more often. Yes, it's a popular means of transport.

Errors: 'Bites' is a misspelling of 'bikes' (word choice), and 'car' lacks the plural form 'cars' (singular/plural). Also, 'vehicle' is acceptable but 'means of transport' is more natural in this context. Replace misspelling, use correct plural for countable nouns, and choose a more natural noun. Suggestion: Proofread for typos, ensure countable nouns agree in number, and prefer more natural collocations.