Bike— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Be more concise and grammatically correct. Start with a clear topic sentence, then give one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Correct verb forms and prepositions (e.g., “bought me”), avoid repetition, and keep to 3–4 sentences. Also combine short fragmented sentences for fluency.

Ví dụ: Yes. I had a bike when I was a child that my father bought for me. I remember feeling very surprised and excited, so I rode it straight away down the street to test it. It was a brand-new model and I loved how smooth and fast it felt.

Gợi ý: Answer directly, then give clear reasons with correct grammar and linking words. Use precise vocabulary (e.g., ‘heavy traffic’, ‘cyclists’, ‘faster in congested areas’) and fix comparisons (‘faster than cars’). Keep to 2–3 sentences and avoid filler words.

Ví dụ: Yes, I think bikes are quite popular in my country because there is heavy traffic in many cities, so cycling can be faster than driving. In addition, many people find bikes cheaper and more convenient for short trips.

× I owned a new bike that my father bought to me.

✓ I owned a new bike that my father bought for me.

The incorrect preposition 'to' is used with 'buy' in this context. English uses 'buy something for someone' to indicate the recipient. Use 'bought for me' to show your father purchased the bike as a gift for you.

× It was so surprising and I, I've been so happy.

✓ It was so surprising and I was so happy.

The sentence mixes past simple ('It was') with present perfect continuous ('I've been') inconsistently for a past event. For a recollection, use past simple for both clauses: 'It was surprising and I was happy.' Also remove the unnecessary comma and contraction for clarity.

× After that. I go, I go to the road and test it.

✓ After that, I went to the road to test it.

The original contains a sentence fragment ('After that.') and uses present tense ('I go') while describing a past event. Combine into one sentence, use past simple ('went') and the infinitive 'to test' to express purpose: 'I went to the road to test it.' Also remove repeated 'I go'.

× It was amazing new.

✓ It was amazingly new. OR It was a brand-new, amazing bike.

'Amazing new' is not a natural adjective order. If stressing the newness use 'brand-new' before the noun or use adverb 'amazingly' to modify an adjective. Better: 'It was a brand-new, amazing bike' or 'It was amazingly new.' The choice depends on intended meaning.

× Actually I think bikes are popular in my country because the there is so traffic in the road and the people with bicycle going so fast then cars so it's a nice faster.

✓ Actually, I think bikes are popular in my country because there is so much traffic on the roads and people on bicycles go faster than cars, so they are a convenient option.

Multiple issues: extra 'the' before 'there' and wrong article with 'traffic' (uncountable so no 'a'), wrong preposition 'in the road' should be 'on the roads', incorrect phrase 'people with bicycle' should be 'people on bicycles', incorrect comparative structure 'going so fast then cars' should be 'go faster than cars', and awkward ending 'it's a nice faster' corrected to 'so they are a convenient option.' Fixing pronouns, prepositions, articles and comparative construction yields a clear sentence.