Part 1
Giám khảo
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Thí sinh
Yes, I had a bike when I was a child and I arrived to my school every day in the morning and in the evening.
Giám khảo
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Thí sinh
Of course, yes, you can see the bikes everywhere in my country and people roadies for entertainment and for job and so on.
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Điểm: 68.0Gợi ý: 回答直接且信息相关,但存在语法和表达问题,应更自然简洁。注意时态与搭配(arrived to → rode/cycled to 或 went to),去掉多余重复(every day in the morning and in the evening 可简化为“to and from school every day”)。可用一到两句补充细节并用连接词衔接。
Ví dụ: Yes, I had a bike as a child. I used to cycle to and from school every day, which saved me time and gave me some exercise.
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Điểm: 62.0Gợi ý: 意思表达清楚但用词与句子结构不够地道(例如 'roadies' 用错,应为 'ride bikes' 或 'cyclists';'for job' 应为 'for work')。建议使用连接词并给出具体例子(通勤、送货、休闲骑行等),一到两句内完成并提供细节。
Ví dụ: Yes, bikes are very popular in my country. Many people ride bicycles for commuting, delivery work and weekend leisure, especially in crowded cities where cycling is faster than driving.
× Yes, I had a bike when I was a child and I arrived to my school every day in the morning and in the evening.
✓ Yes, I had a bike when I was a child and I went to my school every day in the morning and in the evening.
问题类型:过去时用法(Past tense issue)。原句中主句使用了过去时“had”,但后半句用“arrived to”搭配不自然且动词选择不当。英语中通常用“go/go to”或“went”表示“上学、去学校”的动作,且表习惯性动作用一般过去时“went”。此外,介词搭配应为“arrive at school”而不是“arrive to my school”。建议用“went to my school”或更自然地省略“my”:"went to school"。简明建议:用正确的过去时动词(went)并使用正确介词搭配或更常用的表达。
× Of course, yes, you can see the bikes everywhere in my country and people roadies for entertainment and for job and so on.
✓ Of course. You can see bikes everywhere in my country, and people ride bikes for entertainment, for work, and so on.
问题类型:介词/词语使用不当(Incorrect use of prepositions / word choice)。原句中“people roadies”是错误搭配,应该使用动词“ride”而不是名词“roadies”。另外“for job”搭配不自然,应改为“for work”或“for their jobs”。句子连词和标点也可调整以提高可读性。建议使用“ride bikes”或直接“ride”并用“for entertainment”与“for work”这样的固定搭配。