Part 1
Giám khảo
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Thí sinh
Yes, I have.
Giám khảo
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Thí sinh
Yes, in our country there are many people have bags.
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Điểm: 40.0Gợi ý: 用时态、细节和连贯性来丰富回答。现在回答用的是一般现在时,但题目问过去,应使用过去时并给出简短的支持信息(例如什么时候得到的、喜欢骑车的原因或一个记忆)。保持回答自然且不超过5句。示例应包含主题句和一到两句具体细节,并用连接词衔接。
Ví dụ: Yes, I did. I had a small blue bike when I was about eight years old, and I learned to ride it in the park near my house. I loved riding because it gave me freedom and I often rode with my friends on weekends.
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Điểm: 25.0Gợi ý: 回答内容与问题不相符且存在语法错误(如时态和句子结构),需要直接回应“是否流行”,并给出具体原因或例子。使用连词(because, for example)来组织支持性细节,避免无关词汇。保持简洁(最多5句),并使用适当的词汇如 "popular", "commute", "environmentally friendly" 等。
Ví dụ: Yes, I think bikes are quite popular, especially in cities. Many people use bicycles to commute short distances because they are cheap and convenient, and they also help reduce traffic and pollution.
× Yes, I have.
✓ Yes, I did.
原句使用現在式的助動詞 "have" 回答過去式問題(Did you...?),時態不匹配。應使用過去式助動詞 "did" 搭配原形動詞或直接用簡短回答 "Yes, I did."。建議:遇到以 Did 開頭的問句,用過去式回答(Yes/No + did)。
× Yes, in our country there are many people have bags.
✓ Yes, in our country many people have bikes.
原句在 there are 結構後又直接接動詞片語 "have bags",造成重複主詞和句子結構錯誤。題目問自行車(bike),原句用錯單詞 "bags"。改正為省略 there be 結構或改為正確的 there are + 名詞結構,例如:"There are many people who have bikes." 或更簡潔的 "Many people have bikes." 建議:1) 確認主詞和謂語結構是否重複;2) 使用合適名詞(bike 而非 bag);3) 根據語境選擇使用 there is/are 結構或直述主語句子。