Study— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: 回答相对直接但不够简洁，自然停顿过多且有重复信息（"right now"和"I'm in my third year"可更紧凑）。提高流利性与连贯性，减少填充词（uh, well），并可以加一两句补充说明来丰富内容。建议练习用一句话明确身份，随后用一两句补充细节，注意控制句子长度（不超过5句）。

Ví dụ: I'm a third-year marketing student at university. I'm focusing on digital marketing courses this year because I want to learn how online campaigns influence consumer behavior.

Gợi ý: 内容清楚但表达有语法和流利性问题（例如“it was very scenic campus”应为“it's a very scenic campus”），有重复和无意义填充词（MMM, uh）。建议使用正确时态和句子结构，并用连接词增加信息，例如说明校园特色或影响学习的方面。

Ví dụ: I study at Xiamen University in southeastern China. It's a very scenic campus famous for its coastal views, which makes it pleasant to walk around between classes.

Gợi ý: 回答直接但有语法错误与用词不当（如"my schools"应为"my school"，"beautiful sceneries"可改为"beautiful scenery"）。句子略长且重复，建议先给出总体判断，再用一两条具体原因支持，用连接词如"because"或"so"保持流畅。

Ví dụ: Not really. Because my university attracts many tourists to see the beach and sea, the campus can be quite noisy, which makes it harder to concentrate during exams.

Gợi ý: 表达有多个语法错误和不自然的句子（如"make a new library"应为"have a new library"或"build a new library"；"too small, too too much students"语序和词形错误）。回答也超出简洁范围并且末尾问题使句子混乱。建议用一到两句清楚提出改变并具体说明理由与位置，避免提问式结尾。

Ví dụ: Yes. I would like the university to build a larger library near the beach so more students can study comfortably. A quieter, modern library would help during exam periods.

Gợi ý: 回答意图明确但语法混乱且表达不自然（如"Will I want"、"a little bit, uh, an inspiring"、"with suits me interest"）。内容可更具体：说明为什么转专业、想学哪些具体方向，以及如何实现（如课程或计划）。建议练习正确的句型（"I'd like to"/"I'm planning to"）并使用连词连接理由和计划。

Ví dụ: I'm planning to switch my major to psychology and sociology because I'm more interested in understanding human behavior and social issues. I hope to take introductory courses next semester to see if the change suits me.

× Well, uh, right now I'm a student and I'm in my third year of university and my major is marketing.

✓ Well, right now I'm a student. I'm in my third year of university and my major is marketing.

句子中原本使用了多个并列分句且口语填充词过多（uh），建议拆分为更清晰的现在时陈述。动词时态（现在进行/现在时）在此语境下均应为一般现在时/现在进行（I am）。同时将句子分为两句使表达更清楚。建议去掉多余的语气词并注意句子断句。

× I study at Xiamen University which is located in southeastern China. It was very uh, scenic campus and it's quite known across China for its beautiful views. MMM.

✓ I study at Xiamen University, which is located in southeastern China. It has a very scenic campus and it's quite well known across China for its beautiful views.

原句中“It was very scenic campus”缺少冠词且时态不当，应为“has a very scenic campus”或“It is a very scenic campus”。此处描述地点特点用一般现在时更合适。同时“known”前常用“well known”。建议使用逗号分隔定语从句，并使用现在时和恰当冠词。

× Not really, because there are a lot of tourists in my schools.

✓ Not really, because there are a lot of tourists at my school.

“school”在说自己就读的学校时通常用单数“my school”，而原句使用“my schools”造成数的错误。介词也应为“at”而非“in”。

× They want to see the beautiful sceneries of the beach and the sea and I think it is a little bit noisy for our students to study in the such a university.

✓ They want to see the beautiful scenery of the beach and the sea, and I think it is a bit noisy for students to study at such a university.

“scenery”通常不可数，不能用“sceneries”。“a little bit”可以简化为“a bit”。“in the such a university”结构错误，应为“at such a university”或“in such a university”，但更自然的是“at such a university”。并且“our students”改为一般“students”更自然。

× Definitely I want to make a new library in my universities because nowadays there are too small, too too much students and I would like to build a new library beside the beach.

✓ Definitely I want a new library at my university because nowadays there are too few and too many students, and I would like to build it beside the beach.

原句中“in my universities”数和冠词错误，应为“at my university”。“there are too small, too too much students”混用了形容词和量词且不合逻辑：描述数量应使用“too few students”或“too many students”，而“small”用于物体大小。建议改为“too few”或“too many”，根据语境可能是“too many students”。同时避免重复“new library”并合并句子。

× Will I will enjoy the beautiful sceneries where I starting?

✓ Will I enjoy the beautiful scenery where I am staying?

原句有多重错误：使用了双重助动词“Will I will”，应只用一个助动词构成疑问句。“sceneries”应为不可数“scenery”。“starting”显然用错，应为“staying”或“studying”根据上下文，意为“我将会享受我居住/学习地的美景吗”，因此改为“where I am staying”。

× Will I want to switch my major because I found marketing is a little bit, uh, an inspiring.

✓ I might want to switch my major because I find marketing a little uninspiring.

原句使用将来疑问式“Will I want”不自然。表达可能性更合适使用“might”或“want to”。另外时态不一致（过去式“found”与一般现在时混用），应保持现在时“I find”。“a little ... an inspiring”结构错误，正确为“a little uninspiring”或“not very inspiring”。

× I'd like to study psychology and sociology instead in things they would give me deeper understanding of human behaviors and so social issues with suits me interest.

✓ I'd like to study psychology and sociology instead because they would give me a deeper understanding of human behavior and social issues that suit my interests.

原句连接词和从句结构混乱。“instead in things”不正确，应使用“instead because”或直接“instead, they”。“human behaviors”通常用不可数“human behavior”。“so social issues”误用“so”。“with suits me interest”语序和形式错误，应为“that suit my interests”。建议重组句子，使用关系从句“that suit my interests”。