Study— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Be more concise and natural: give a clear topic sentence then one short supporting detail. Avoid overly formal phrasing (e.g., ‘Bachelors of Business Administration under’). Use correct punctuation and capitalization. For fluency, reduce hesitation and speak with steady rhythm.

Ví dụ: I’m currently a student studying for a Bachelor of Business Administration at Sardar Patel University. I’m focusing on marketing courses because I want to work in advertising after graduation.

Gợi ý: Start with a direct topic sentence, then add one or two specific details linked with a connector. Correct grammar (subject-verb agreement) and use natural linking words like ‘also’ or ‘besides’. Avoid repeating generic praise without specifics.

Ví dụ: I study in Anand, which is famous as the milk capital of India. Besides that, it offers strong educational facilities, such as several reputable colleges and good student housing.

Gợi ý: Provide a concise direct answer plus one concrete reason. Avoid vague words like ‘very good’ and repetition. Use linking words (‘because’, ‘for example’) and correct article usage (‘an excellent place’).

Ví dụ: Yes, it’s an excellent place to study because there are many universities offering modern libraries and well-equipped labs, which help students learn effectively.

Gợi ý: Be direct and specific: answer the question with a clear proposal for change, give a reason, and avoid fillers (uh, umm). Keep it to two or three sentences and use linking words (‘because’, ‘so that’).

Ví dụ: Yes, I would like the study environment to be more flexible. For example, I would introduce quiet study zones and more evening classes so students with part-time jobs can attend.

Gợi ý: Start with a clear topic sentence, then add specific reasons using linking words. Correct grammar (’master’s degree’, subject-verb agreement) and avoid repeating ‘I feel’. Mention concrete benefits or plans.

Ví dụ: I plan to pursue a master’s degree in Canada because universities there have strong research programs and diverse student communities. Studying abroad will also help me improve my English and build an international network.

× Currently, I am a student and I am pursuing my Bachelors of Business Administration under Sardar Patel University.

✓ Currently, I am a student and I am pursuing my Bachelor's degree in Business Administration at Sardar Patel University.

Use the possessive apostrophe in 'Bachelor's' and include 'degree' for natural phrasing. Use 'in' or 'of' for the subject (Business Administration) and 'at' for the university; 'under' is unnatural in this context. These are article and word choice issues and make the phrase idiomatic.

× I'm studying in Anand which is widely renowned as milk capital of India.

✓ I'm studying in Anand, which is widely renowned as the milk capital of India.

Missing comma before the nonrestrictive clause and missing definite article 'the' before 'milk capital of India'. Use 'the' for unique titles. Also add comma for clause clarity.

× Apart from that, it also provide excellent educational facilities to students.

✓ Apart from that, it also provides excellent educational facilities to students.

Subject 'it' requires third person singular verb form 'provides'. This is a subject-verb agreement (third person singular) error.

× Definitely, it is the excellent place to study because there are many universities and colleges which are providing very good facilities to students.

✓ Definitely, it is an excellent place to study because there are many universities and colleges which provide very good facilities to students.

Use the indefinite article 'an' before 'excellent' because the noun phrase is nonspecific. 'Are providing' is present continuous but general fact suits simple present 'provide'. Change tense for natural general statement.

× If in future I will get chance to uh, make any difference in my study plan place, so I will surely, umm, change my, uh, schedule of studying.

✓ If in the future I get the chance to make changes to my study plan, I will surely change my study schedule.

Conditional sentences use present tense in the if-clause for real future conditions: 'If I get...' not 'If I will get...'. Remove filler sounds and redundant words, use 'the chance' and 'make changes to my study plan' for clarity. 'So' is unnecessary with conditional main clause.

× Like, uh, a student can, uh, learn and they can get knowledge at any uh, place.

✓ For example, a student can learn and gain knowledge anywhere.

Avoid mixing singular 'a student' with plural pronoun 'they' unless using singular 'they' deliberately; better to keep pronoun agreement or rephrase. 'Get knowledge' is less natural than 'gain knowledge', and 'at any place' should be 'anywhere'. Remove fillers.

× In future, I want to pursue my master degree in Canada.

✓ In the future, I want to pursue my master's degree in Canada.

Use 'the future' with the phrase and include the possessive apostrophe in 'master's degree'. Also 'master's degree' is the standard term.

× I feel that Canada provide best education facilities.

✓ I feel that Canada provides the best educational facilities.

Country 'Canada' is third person singular and requires 'provides'. Add definite article 'the' before 'best' and use adjective 'educational' rather than noun 'education' to modify 'facilities'.

× Apart from that, I feel that I can connect to more people and it will increase my communication skills.

✓ Apart from that, I feel that I can connect with more people and it will improve my communication skills.

Use 'connect with' rather than 'connect to' for interacting with people. 'Increase my communication skills' is less natural than 'improve my communication skills'.