Study— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Be more concise and directly answer first, then give one or two clear supporting details. Reduce fillers ("umm") and correct grammar (e.g. "I sometimes work a part-time job"). Use linking words like "and" or "but" to connect ideas and keep to 2–4 sentences.

Ví dụ: I'm a student. I especially enjoy studying subjects that interest me, and I also work a part-time job to gain practical experience. This job helps me develop time-management and communication skills.

Gợi ý: Provide a clear topic sentence naming the college, then give concise, specific details. Avoid vague phrases and filler words. Use linking words ("for example", "also") to structure the answer and correct grammar (e.g. "it contains many green fields" and "I study computer science").

Ví dụ: I study at a large, attractive college called Sunnydale College. For example, the campus has several sports fields, a gym, and modern labs, which makes it easy to balance study and exercise. I study computer science, and I really enjoy the practical projects in my course.

Gợi ý: Start with a clear opinion, then give specific reasons and a brief example. Avoid incomplete sentences and vague references. Use linking words like "because" and "for example" and finish your example to show relevance.

Ví dụ: Yes, it's an excellent place to study because the teachers are supportive and explain concepts clearly. For example, a teacher recently used a real-world case study that helped me understand how theories apply in practice.

Gợi ý: State one clear change you want and explain why with a specific benefit. Avoid repetition and unclear phrasing. Use linking words like "one change I would suggest is" and "because". Correct grammar ("offer summer courses" or "extend summer study options").

Ví dụ: Yes. One change I would suggest is offering optional summer courses because they would give students extra time to catch up or take additional modules, which could reduce stress during the regular academic year.

Gợi ý: Give a clear topic sentence about your plan, then add one or two specific reasons and a linking phrase. Use formal language (avoid "wanna") and correct grammar ("My plan is to pursue" or "I plan to pursue a degree in"). Mention a concrete next step if possible.

Ví dụ: I plan to pursue a degree in biology because it will prepare me for medical school. For instance, taking biology and related courses now will strengthen my application and give me the foundational knowledge I need for a career in medicine.

× I'm actually a student, I love studying, especially when I'm learning something umm genuinely interested to as I sometimes work as a part time job which is very good because it allows me to have a good experience in life.

✓ I'm actually a student; I love studying, especially when I'm learning something I'm genuinely interested in. I sometimes work a part-time job, which is very good because it allows me to gain valuable life experience.

This sentence has incorrect use of prepositions ('interested to' should be 'interested in') and problems with article/preposition in 'work as a part time job' (use 'work a part-time job' or 'have a part-time job'). It also needs clearer verb choices: 'have a good experience in life' is awkward; 'gain valuable life experience' is natural. Suggest breaking the long run-on into two sentences and using correct prepositions and hyphenated compound adjective 'part-time'.

× I actually study in a beautiful college.

✓ I actually study at a beautiful college.

Use of preposition with 'study' and institutions: 'study at a college' is correct, not 'study in a college'. Use 'at' for attending institutions.

× My college is very big. It has lot of umm, places where you can place ports and it's contains a lot of Greenfield where you can play football, basketball and it has a gym.

✓ My college is very big. It has a lot of places for sports, and it contains many green fields where you can play football and basketball, and it also has a gym.

Multiple issues: missing article 'a' before 'lot' (singular/plural matter), incorrect phrase 'place ports' should be 'places for sports', and 'Greenfield' should be 'green fields' (plural). 'It's contains' is incorrect structure; use 'it contains' or 'it has'. Correct pluralization and articles improve clarity.

× I see the computer science and I really like it.

✓ I study computer science and I really like it.

'I see the computer science' is incorrect verb/pronoun usage. Use 'study' to describe subject of study. The pronoun 'it' is fine to refer to 'computer science' after correction.

× The main reason it does the teachers are very nice and they teach us a lot of interesting thing either in life or in education.

✓ The main reason is that the teachers are very nice and they teach us many interesting things, both about life and about education.

Original sentence has broken structure and missing 'that' after 'reason'. 'Interesting thing' should be plural 'interesting things'. Use 'both... and...' for the two areas. This fixes sentence structure and plurality.

× For example, I still remember that recently the teacher.

✓ For example, I still remember something the teacher said recently.

The original is an incomplete sentence lacking a main verb and object. Rephrase to include what was remembered and use correct word order: 'something the teacher said recently' completes the thought.

× Yes, definitely. I would like that. My college where I study make a lot of changes.

✓ Yes, definitely. I would like that. My college, where I study, should make a lot of changes.

Problems: subject-verb agreement and article/structure. 'My college where I study make' lacks proper punctuation and has incorrect verb form 'make' (should be 'should make' or 'needs to make'). Adding commas and a modal verb fixes grammar and meaning.

× One of them and the main reason is studying at summer because it will make us have extra time for the next years.

✓ One of the main changes would be holding classes in the summer because this would give us extra time in the following years.

'Studying at summer' is incorrect preposition and phrase; use 'holding classes in the summer' or 'studying during the summer'. Tense and modality: use 'would' to express a proposed change. 'The next years' is awkward; use 'the following years' or 'future years'.

× My future study plans is I'm planning to pursue a degree in biology because it could improve my career prospects as I wanna do medicine later which is very interesting and I dreamed of doing it since I was a kid.

✓ My future study plans are that I'm planning to pursue a degree in biology because it could improve my career prospects, as I want to study medicine later, which is very interesting; I have dreamed of doing it since I was a kid.

Subject-verb agreement: 'plans' is plural so use 'are'. Combine and reorder clauses for clarity. Replace informal 'wanna' with 'want to'. Use present perfect 'have dreamed' to indicate a desire continuing from the past to present. Also add commas and conjunctions for readability.