Study— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Be more concise and confident. Start with a clear topic sentence stating your status, then add one short supporting detail about your subject and current situation. Avoid fillers (uh, um) and repetitions.

Ví dụ: I am a student studying Management at university. I am not working at the moment because I am focusing on my studies full-time.

Gợi ý: Give a direct answer about the institution, then add one specific reason or future plan linked to your studies. Use linking words to make it coherent and avoid unclear phrases.

Ví dụ: I study at National University, where I major in Management. Because I enjoy the subject, I plan to pursue a career in banking after graduation.

Gợi ý: Answer clearly with one reason why it is a good place, and give a specific example (facilities, faculty, reputation). Remove hesitations and unnecessary background information.

Ví dụ: Yes, it is a good university because it has experienced faculty and well-equipped classrooms. Many students from my area enroll there after finishing high school.

Gợi ý: Directly state whether you would like changes and specify one or two realistic improvements with reasons. Use linking words to connect ideas and avoid repeating praise without details.

Ví dụ: Overall I like the university, but I would improve the library hours and add more study spaces because longer opening times and quiet areas would help students study more effectively.

Gợi ý: Provide a clear plan: state one concrete goal (e.g., study abroad for a master's), give a reason and, if possible, a next step. Eliminate hesitations and vague words like 'others continue'.

Ví dụ: I plan to study abroad for a master's degree in Management to gain international experience and improve my skills. My next step is to prepare for the required exams and apply to universities next year.

× I am a student uh, my subject is management, so frequently I don't, I can, I don't work right now.

✓ I am a student. My subject is management, so I don't work right now.

The original sentence uses unnecessary pronoun fragments and modal fragments ('I can') that confuse meaning. Combine clauses clearly and remove extra fragments. Use 'I don't work right now' to state current status. Suggestion: speak in full simple sentences and avoid filler words.

× I'm a student of National University.

✓ I'm a student at the National University.

Use 'at' or 'in' for attending an institution; include the definite article 'the' if the university is specific: 'the National University'. Using 'of' is unnatural here.

× My subject is management and I also love my subject.

✓ My subject is management, and I love it.

Repeating 'my subject' is redundant. Replace the second occurrence with the pronoun 'it' and join clauses with a comma and conjunction for clearer structure.

× This subject will be held in future Become a banker.

✓ I plan to become a banker in the future.

The original mixes unrelated fragments. Rephrase to express intention: 'I plan to become a banker in the future.' This corrects tense and clarifies meaning.

× Yes, in my county uh this university is good for anyone because we are a student.

✓ Yes, in my country this university is good for anyone because we are students.

Correct 'county' to 'country' (likely intended), and use the plural 'students' to agree with 'we'. Also remove filler 'uh' and add commas for clarity.

× After intermediate pass they go university admitted.

✓ After passing intermediate school, they are admitted to university.

Original word order and verb forms are incorrect. Use the gerund 'passing' and passive 'are admitted' to show process. Also add articles as needed.

× Yeah, I like this place where I study.

✓ Yes, I like the place where I study.

Use 'Yes' instead of informal 'Yeah' in formal responses; 'the place' is more natural than 'this place' in this context.

× This place is good for anyone for study.

✓ This place is good for anyone to study at.

Use the infinitive 'to study' and place the preposition 'at' at the end for natural English: 'good for anyone to study at.' Avoid repeating 'for'.

× So the diversity is facility is so good.

✓ The facilities and diversity are very good.

Original has repetition and incorrect nouns. Use plural 'facilities' and separate 'diversity' as another noun; 'very good' is a natural intensifier.

× So anyone, everyone choose that varsity.

✓ So anyone or everyone chooses that university.

Use 'chooses' for third-person singular generic subject and replace 'varsity' with the more common 'university'. Clarify coordination with 'or'.

× Uh, uh, my study, uh, my future study plans, uh, I want to be go abroad for student and I want to improve my, my studies.

✓ My future study plan is to go abroad as a student and improve my studies.

Remove fillers and fix verb forms: 'to go abroad' (infinitive) and 'as a student' clarify role. 'Improve my studies' is acceptable; avoid repeating words. Keep concise structure.

× Others continue.

✓ I also want to continue my studies.

'Others continue' is vague and unrelated. Rephrase to clearly state the student's intention: 'I also want to continue my studies.' This corrects sentence completeness and meaning.