Study— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Be more fluent and avoid filler words. Start with a clear topic sentence, correct minor grammar (say "a second-year student"), and keep it concise. Add one brief detail about your major to enrich the answer.

Ví dụ: I’m a second-year student at the University of Economics and Law in Ho Chi Minh City. I’m studying business administration, and I’m focusing on courses in accounting and management.

Gợi ý: Answer directly, avoid repetition and filler sounds, and use correct institution name and phrasing. Give one or two specific facts (reputation, location, or strengths) linked with a linking word to make it coherent.

Ví dụ: I study at the University of Economics and Law, which is one of the most well-known universities in Ho Chi Minh City. It’s especially respected for its programs in economics and law.

Gợi ý: Give a clear topic sentence and support it with two specific reasons linked by cohesive words (for example, "because" and "also"). Reduce hesitations and correct grammar ("because it’s famous for the quality of education in economics and law; the lecturers are" ).

Ví dụ: Yes, it’s a good place to study because it’s famous for the quality of education in economics and law. Also, the lecturers are supportive and use modern teaching methods that help students learn practically.

Gợi ý: Respond directly with a clear topic sentence (Yes/No) and give one or two concrete reasons. Use correct grammar (e.g., "my university has two buildings" and "the number of classrooms is sufficient") and avoid filler words.

Ví dụ: No, I wouldn’t recommend major changes because the university has two buildings and there are enough classrooms for students. The facilities are generally comfortable and meet our needs.

Gợi ý: Structure your answer with a topic sentence and two clear details: short-term and long-term plans. Remove hesitations and correct phrasing ("I aim to get an IELTS band 6.0 within four months"; "in two years I will complete my degree in Business Administration").

Ví dụ: Short-term, I aim to achieve an IELTS band 6.0 within the next four months. In the longer term, I plan to complete my degree in Business Administration in two years.

× Uh, I'm currently the second year student, uh, at University of Economics and Law in Ho Chi Minh City.

✓ Uh, I'm currently a second-year student at the University of Economics and Law in Ho Chi Minh City.

Use the singular count noun with an article: 'a second-year student'. Hyphenate 'second-year' as a compound adjective. Include the definite article 'the' before the proper university name. This fixes singular/plural and article errors and makes the phrase natural.

× I am currently studying at University of Economics and Laws. Uh is a member of uh, Vietnamese, uh, nation universities, national universities, uh, one of the uh, uh, the famous, one of the most famous university in Ho Chi Minh City.

✓ I am currently studying at the University of Economics and Law. It is a member of Vietnam's national universities and one of the most famous universities in Ho Chi Minh City.

Add the definite article 'the' before the university name. Use the singular correct name 'Law' not 'Laws'. Replace vague filler words. Use 'It' as the subject pronoun for the university. Use the possessive form 'Vietnam's' and plural 'universities' when referring to the group. 'One of the most famous universities' requires plural 'universities' after 'one of the'.

× Uh, because of is famous for the quality in, uh, educating about like economics and laws. So, uh, the lecturer, they are very hospitable. Uh, they are very innovative and always so.

✓ It is famous for the quality of education in subjects like economics and law. The lecturers are very hospitable and innovative.

Begin with 'It' as subject. Use 'quality of education' not 'quality in educating'. Use 'subjects like economics and law' (singular 'law' in academic subject). 'Lecturer' should be plural 'lecturers' to match 'they'. Remove 'always so' which is unclear. This corrects articles, noun forms, and subject-pronoun agreement.

× Uh, actually, uh, I think that, uh, my university now having to buildings and, uh, the number of class in the building is enough for student to, uh, study comfortable ways.

✓ Actually, I think that my university now has two buildings, and the number of classrooms in the buildings is enough for students to study comfortably.

Use the present simple 'has' instead of the -ing form 'having'. Replace 'to' with 'two'. Use plural 'classrooms' and 'buildings' to match 'two'. Use plural 'students' and adverb 'comfortably' rather than adjective 'comfortable' to modify the verb 'study'. This fixes verb form, number, and adverb/adjective usage.

× I, I don't, uh, really recommend to, uh, make any adjustment.

✓ I don't really recommend making any adjustments.

English prefers the gerund after 'recommend' ('recommend making') rather than 'recommend to make'. Use plural 'adjustments' for general changes. Remove stuttering filler. This corrects verb pattern and plural usage.

× In the future, for the next four months, I, I set my target to uh, reach the IELTS uh, test like uh, at band 6.0.

✓ In the next four months, I have set my target to reach a band 6.0 in the IELTS test.

Use present perfect 'have set' to describe a current target for the near future, or simple present 'I plan' could also work. Use 'a band 6.0' and natural word order 'reach a band 6.0 in the IELTS test.' This corrects tense and article use.

× And two years later I will have the degree of like administration, uh, B business administration university.

✓ Two years later I will have a degree in Business Administration.

Use 'a degree in Business Administration' as the correct collocation. Remove filler words and incorrect word order. This corrects article use and forms for expressing future possession of a degree.