Study— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: 回答要更简洁、语法更准确，并纠正发音与拼写错误（例如: theoretical, subjects）。可以用一到两句概括身份和专业，然后一句话补充学习内容与实践机会，避免冗长。练习连接词（and, also, focusing on）以保持语流自然。

Ví dụ: I'm a third-year university student majoring in English for Tourism. I study subjects such as tour guiding and tourism management, combining theoretical courses with practical training.

Gợi ý: 注意时态一致（use present tense）并提高句子流畅性，减少填充词（uh）。用更自然的衔接词（for example, so）并替换口语化或错误表达（"very easy" → "very easily" 或 "it's easy to get around"）。

Ví dụ: I study in Beijing; my campus is in the city center, so transportation is very convenient. There are two subway stations nearby, which makes it easy to get around the city.

Gợi ý: 注意句子结构和主谓一致（"campus is now big" 不通顺，"teachers here are"）。避免数字与名词搭配错误（dining halls），并用更具体描述支持观点（例如设施、学习氛围）。控制句子数量不超过5句。

Ví dụ: Yes, it's a good place to study because it has excellent facilities, including a stadium, a swimming pool, two libraries and several dining halls. The campus atmosphere is friendly and the teachers are very supportive.

Gợi ý: 首先纠正大量词汇与拼写错误（canvas → campus, compass → campus, rebuilded → rebuilt, Donny Hall → student/assembly hall?), 并简化表达。直接回答是否希望改变，并具体说明要改进的地方（如更多自习室、更新设施、改善教室设备），用一到两句具体细节。

Ví dụ: Yes, I would like some improvements to the campus. For example, I'd appreciate more modern study spaces and updated library facilities; they recently rebuilt part of the campus, but more comfortable classrooms and better Wi‑Fi would help students study more effectively.

Gợi ý: 回答清晰且内容具体，但可提高连贯性与词汇准确性（"master degree" → "a master's degree"）。可以用连接词表明条件（If..., otherwise...）并补充原因或目标以丰富内容。

Ví dụ: I plan to continue my studies and apply for a master's degree. If I remain in China, I'll likely study Business English; otherwise, if I go abroad, I would prefer a master's in International Business because I want to work in global tourism management.

× Right now I'm a third year university student and my major is English for Tourism. I study both English and travel related subject like tour guiding and tourism management combining theriotic and practical training.

✓ Right now I'm a third-year university student and my major is English for Tourism. I study both English and travel-related subjects like tour guiding and tourism management, combining theoretic and practical training.

错误类型：10（动词的现在分词形式）以及其他相关语法与拼写问题。说明：句中“combining theriotic and practical training”用作现在分词短语修饰前面的主句是可以的，但原句拼写有误（theriotic 应为 theoretic 或 theoretical），且“travel related subject”应为复数并用连字符修饰复合形容词（travel-related subjects）。建议：1) 将“third year”改为“third-year”作复合形容词；2) 将“travel related subject”改为“travel-related subjects”；3) 纠正拼写“theriotic”→“theoretic”或“theoretical”；4) 在“management”和“combining”之间加逗号以提高可读性。

× I studied in Beijing and my campus is located in the city center of Beijing, and the transportation is very convenient. We have two uh subway stations near my campus, and you can go anywhere very easy.

✓ I study in Beijing and my campus is located in the city center of Beijing, and the transportation is very convenient. We have two subway stations near my campus, and you can get anywhere very easily.

错误类型：5（过去时问题）和13/20（副词位置及使用）。说明：问的是“Where do you study?” 应使用一般现在时而非过去时；“very easy”应改为副词形式“very easily”或“quite easily”（副词修饰动词）；“uh”可省略。建议：将“studied”改为“study”，并将“very easy”改为“very easily”或改写为“it's very easy to get anywhere”。

× I think it's a good place to study, although my campus is now big but it has A1 stadium and one swimming pool, 2 libraries and four dining home. It's very warm and the teachers here is very kind.

✓ I think it's a good place to study. Although my campus is not very big, it has an A1 stadium, one swimming pool, two libraries and four dining halls. It's very warm and the teachers here are very kind.

错误类型：12（代词/指代错误）以及其他多项：句子结构与数的一致性问题。说明：原句中逻辑混乱（although ... but 同时出现），“now big”应为“not very big”可能是想表达“并不大”；数字应写出或统一数字格式，“dining home”应为“dining halls”；“teachers here is”主谓不一致，应为“teachers ... are”。建议：1) 不要同时用 although 和 but；2) 改为“not very big”或明确意思；3) 修正名词复数形式并保证主谓一致。

× Of course, although my canvas right now is good, but I think that my I want my compass to make any changes to be more comprehensive. And right now during the summer vacation and my campus have a rebuilded some, uh, rebuild the libraries and Donny Hall.

✓ Of course. Although my campus is fine right now, I want it to make some changes to be more comprehensive. During the summer vacation my campus rebuilt some facilities, for example the libraries and Donny Hall.

错误类型：9（过去分词）和26（句子结构错误）、11（介词使用） 。说明：原句中“canvas/compass”为拼写错误，应为“campus”；句子使用了不必要的连接词（although ... but），结构混乱；“have a rebuilded some”是错误的，被动/完成时使用不当，应使用“rebuilt（过去式）”或“has rebuilt”视语境而定。建议：1) 将拼写改为 campus；2) 不要同时用 although 和 but；3) 用清晰的时态：若描述已发生的事情用“rebuilt”或“has rebuilt”；4) 简化句子并去掉多余词。

× I think I will continue to study in the future. I plan to apply for a master degree. If I stay in China, I will probably choose business English. If I have a chance to go abroad, I like to study international business.

✓ I think I will continue to study in the future. I plan to apply for a master's degree. If I stay in China, I will probably choose Business English. If I have a chance to go abroad, I would like to study international business.

错误类型：4（情态动词/表达愿望方式）及22（冠词错误）。说明：“master degree”应为“master's degree”（所有格作学位名）; 最后一条条件句中表达愿望用“would like”比单纯“like”更符合英语习惯（表示假设情境下的愿望）；“business English”作为专业名可大写词首。建议：1) 将“master degree”改为“master's degree”；2) 将“If I have a chance to go abroad, I like to study”改为“If I have a chance to go abroad, I would like to study”。