Study— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Cụ thể hơn khi trả lời, sửa ngữ pháp và tránh lặp từ. Dùng câu chủ đề ngắn gọn, theo sau bằng một hoặc hai chi tiết cụ thể (ví dụ tên trường, thời gian học, kỷ niệm). Chú ý thì động từ (I have been studying), giới từ (at/on/in), và số ít/ số nhiều (teachers). Hạn chế tối đa 3–4 câu để tự nhiên và mạch lạc.

Ví dụ: I am a high school student at Shenyang Tom Street School. I have been studying there for three years, and I have many fond memories with my classmates and teachers from school events and lessons.

Gợi ý: Cải thiện trật tự từ và ngữ pháp, cung cấp thông tin rõ ràng về vị trí và đặc điểm cụ thể. Sử dụng liên từ để nối ý (for example, and, so) và sửa lỗi chia động từ. Tránh từ viết tắt hoặc không rõ (EA).

Ví dụ: I study at Chengyang School, which is located on Lauder Street. Although the school is quite small, it has a pleasant green area where students can exercise and study outdoors.

Gợi ý: Câu trả lời đã tốt về nội dung và cấu trúc; hãy giữ câu chủ đề rõ ràng rồi bổ sung lí do cụ thể hơn bằng một ví dụ ngắn. Có thể thêm linking phrase như 'for example' để minh họa. Giữ ngắn gọn trong 2–3 câu.

Ví dụ: Yes, I think it is a great place to study because the teachers are very supportive and the classmates are friendly. For example, when I struggle with homework, classmates and teachers always offer help promptly.

Gợi ý: Trình bày mong muốn rõ ràng bằng câu chủ đề, sửa ngữ pháp (I would like the school to be bigger / the small space reduces my energy). Nêu một hoặc hai lý do cụ thể và dùng liên từ để nối ý (because, moreover). Tránh lặp từ và dùng tính từ đúng (bigger, smaller).

Ví dụ: I would like my school to have larger sports facilities because the current space is cramped and makes outdoor practice tiring. Moreover, bigger grounds would allow more students to train at the same time.

Gợi ý: Trả lời rõ ràng về kế hoạch và lý do cụ thể. Sửa lỗi ngữ pháp và trật tự từ (improve my social skills, make new friends, apply to a social media club). Dùng linking words (so, because, therefore) và đưa một ví dụ về hoạt động bạn muốn tham gia. Giữ 2–3 câu.

Ví dụ: In the future I plan to continue my studies and apply to the social media club at college because I want to improve my communication skills and meet new people. For example, I hope to work on the club's social campaigns and practice teamwork.

× At school is located on Hungary Street.

✓ The school is located on Hungary Street.

Incorrect word order and missing subject. In English, use 'There is/are' or place the subject before the verb: 'The school is located...'. Suggestion: start with 'The school' then 'is located'.

× I have been studies at the in there for three years and in there I have many lovely memories with my friends and teacher.

✓ I have been studying there for three years, and I have many lovely memories with my friends and teachers.

Used 'have been studies' which mixes present perfect continuous structure incorrectly. Use present perfect continuous: 'have been studying'. Also remove unnecessary articles and correct plural 'teachers'. Suggestion: use 'have been studying' and 'teachers'.

× I study as a Chengyang school is located in Lauder St. and in their.

✓ I study at Chengyang School which is located on Lauder St., and there.

Incorrect prepositions and words: use 'study at' for attending a school, 'which is located on' for addresses, and 'there' instead of 'their'. Suggestion: use 'study at Chengyang School, which is located on Lauder St.'

× My school is very small but it's provide for me a green space to do exercise and study EA.

✓ My school is very small but it provides me with a green space to exercise and study.

Incorrect pronoun contraction and verb form: use 'it provides' (third person singular). Also use 'provides me with' or 'offers me', not 'provide for me'. 'Exercise' used as verb; remove 'EA' which is unclear. Suggestion: 'it provides me with a green space to exercise and study.'

× Yes, my school is one of the best in my city.

✓ Yes, my school is one of the best in my city.

No change needed; sentence is grammatically correct. Kept for completeness.

× Well I would like the place where I study will be more bigger because the small space was reduce my energy when we when we practice sport and besides that the bigger place can provide more room for me to practice.

✓ Well, I would like the place where I study to be bigger because the small space reduces my energy when we practice sports; besides that, a bigger place would provide more room for me to practice.

Multiple issues: incorrect use of modal and clause structure. After 'would like' use infinitive 'to be' not 'will be'. 'More bigger' is redundant; use 'bigger'. 'Was reduce' is wrong tense and form; use present 'reduces' for habitual effect. 'Practice sport' should be 'practice sports'. Suggestion: use 'would like... to be bigger' and correct verb forms and number.

× In my future, I am going to continue my studies and I think I will apply for a social media club because I want to improve my social skill and I want to make my a new friends in the college school and for example.

✓ In the future, I am going to continue my studies, and I think I will apply to a social media club because I want to improve my social skills and make new friends in college.

Preposition and article issues and plural nouns: 'apply to a club' not 'apply for a club' (both possible but 'apply to' is common for clubs), 'social skills' should be plural, 'make new friends' no extra article 'a', and 'college' is sufficient; remove 'school and for example'. Suggestion: 'I will apply to a social media club to improve my social skills and make new friends in college.'