Study— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: 回答需更直接且语法准确，避免模糊或矛盾表述（例如“in neither year of high school”不清楚）。保持句子简短，提供一到两句支持细节即可。注意时态和主谓一致，尽量使用自然短语来表达目标和动机。

Ví dụ: I’m a high school student. I’m studying hard because I want to enter a good university, so I take extra classes and join competitions to improve my chances.

Gợi ý: 句子要更简洁流畅，避免冗余连接词（例如开头的“While”不必）。进一步具体化细节（如课程类型或校园氛围）会更好。注意冠词和单复数（specialized -> specializes，curriculums -> curricula或courses）。

Ví dụ: I study at Ring Washington High School in Taichung. The school specializes in English and Chinese and offers a range of language courses, with supportive teachers and a friendly atmosphere.

Gợi ý: 注意冠词和形容词搭配（a amazing -> an amazing），保持时态一致（gave -> give or have given）。避免重复信息，提供更具体例子并用连接词自然衔接。把“impression sheets”改为更常见表达（e.g. practice sheets）。

Ví dụ: Yes, it’s an excellent place to study because the teachers are very supportive. For example, my English teacher gives us extra practice sheets and regular feedback, which has helped me improve my writing and vocabulary.

Gợi ý: 表述需更自然、用词更准确（appreciate -> adopt，hygiene expectation -> hygiene inspections，more healthier -> healthier）。把原因和建议分成两部分，使用连词（because / so）使逻辑更清晰。

Ví dụ: Yes. I would like the school to improve cafeteria hygiene because there have been issues with poor-quality ingredients and unhealthy cooking oil. For example, the school could conduct more frequent hygiene inspections and offer healthier, more nutritious meal options.

Gợi ý: 回答要更准确自然，避免语法和词序错误（apply to you at university name -> apply to Zhongshin University）。用更具体的计划和连接词来组织（first, then, also）。尽量不要重复“really want”。

Ví dụ: I plan to apply to Zhongshin University in Taichung because it’s well-known for its English programs. I also hope to take part in more competitions and pursue professional certifications to strengthen my profile.

× Well, I am currently a high school student in neither year of high school.

✓ Well, I am currently a high school student in my second year of high school.

句子中用法混乱（"in neither year of high school"不通）。这里想表达的是「我在高中的第二年」，应使用序数词并加上所有格。建议用“my second year”来明确年级。

× So I have been studying hard and try to participate in more competitions in order to make myself more competitive.

✓ So I have been studying hard and trying to participate in more competitions in order to make myself more competitive.

并列动词时时态需一致。前半句用现在完成进行时（have been studying），后半句要用与之配合的动名词形式trying，而不是简单现在式try。将第二个动词改为动名词可以保持结构一致。

× While I am currently studying in high school in Ring Washington High School, which is located in Taichung.

✓ I am currently studying at Ring Washington High School, which is located in Taichung.

句子以While开头但没有完整对照从句，且介词用法错误（study at a school）。建议去掉不必要的while且用“at”表示在某校就读，使句子完整且时态正确。

× My school specialized in English and Chinese and it's quite known for its various curriculums and friendly teachers.

✓ My school specializes in English and Chinese, and it's well known for its various curricula and friendly teachers.

时态和词形错误：应使用一般现在时specializes来表示常态；curriculums为常见非正式复数，学术上用curricula更合适；短语“quite known”不自然，改为“well known”。另外保持并列句时用逗号加and连接。

× Well, I think it is a amazing place to study because the teachers are very friendly and always supportive.

✓ Well, I think it is an amazing place to study because the teachers are very friendly and always supportive.

a 与元音音素开头的单词前应使用不定冠词an，而不是a。amazing以元音音素开头，需改为an。

× They provide us various curriculums and gave us some valuable lessons.

✓ They provide us with various curricula and give us some valuable lessons.

句中时态不一致：前半句为一般现在时provide，后半句却用过去式gave，应统一为一般现在时以表示经常发生的事情；并修正搭配为provide sb with sth；curriculums改为更正式的curricula。

× For example, my English teacher provide us extra impression sheets which improve my English skills.

✓ For example, my English teacher provides us with extra impression sheets which improve my English skills.

主谓一致错误：teacher为单数，所以动词应为provides；并且英语中常用provide sb with sth；此外句子中时态用一般现在时，which从句的improve可保留表示这些表单一般会提升技能。

× Well, I would like my school to improve food safety in the cafeteria because we used to have problems with poor quality ingredients or bad cooking oil.

✓ Well, I would like my school to improve food safety in the cafeteria because we have had problems with poor-quality ingredients and bad cooking oil.

used to 表示过去经常发生但现在不再发生，若想表达过去至今有问题应使用have had或have been having；poor quality作形容词需连字符poor-quality；and比or更合适列举并存的问题。

× So I really want my school to appreciate more frequent hygiene expectation and provide us more healthier and nutritious meals.

✓ So I really want my school to carry out more frequent hygiene inspections and provide us with healthier and more nutritious meals.

原句中appreciate 用法错误，应为carry out inspections（进行检查）；hygiene expectation不是固定搭配，应为hygiene inspections或hygiene checks；provide用法需为provide sb with sth；more healthier重复比较级错误，改为healthier；语序调整使表达自然。

× Well, I really want to apply to you at university name Zhongshin University because it is located in Taichung and is famous for its English lessons.

✓ Well, I really want to apply to Zhongshin University because it is located in Taichung and is famous for its English programs.

原句中“apply to you at university name”结构不正确，apply to 后接学校名称即可；university name不应写出，直接用University name放在前面。另用programs替代lessons更符合学校专业与科系的表达。说明：以上为按要求只改与列出语法问题类型相关的句子和错误。