Study— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: 回答需要更简洁且语言准确。注意句子清晰表达（如“chose these files”与“have a name”是不正确的短语），避免冗长或不相关的信息。使用一到两句主题句说明身份，再用一两句具体细节支持（例如专业、职业目标和日常安排）。注意语法（例如 “I chose this field”, “I am interested”）。

Ví dụ: I am a Business Analytics student at BNBU. I chose this field because I’m interested in how businesses operate and I hope to start my own company one day. Usually I spend my days attending lectures, working on assignments and joining study groups.

Gợi ý: 答案较好但句子结构有些冗长且有口语停顿（“umm”）。注意连贯性与准确表达（如“meet others professors”应为“meet professors and classmates”）。建议先给出地点，再用一至两句说明具体设施如何帮助学习，使用连接词使逻辑更清晰。

Ví dụ: I usually study on my university campus, mainly in the dedicated study areas and the well-equipped computer labs. These places are convenient for accessing resources and meeting professors or classmates for group projects.

Gợi ý: 回答重复较多（“very good place, place”），表达可以更自然和具体。建议用一到两句给出总体评价，再用具体理由支持（比如安静的环境、资源丰富、方便与导师交流）。避免重复词汇，注意语法错误（如多余的“to have”）。

Ví dụ: Yes, definitely. The campus is very conducive to studying because it’s quiet and has plenty of academic resources. It’s also easy to organise group projects and get tutoring when needed.

Gợi ý: 回答思路明确，但有语法和表达问题（“if we can have”应为“if we could have”或“we had”，“help us help the campus relaxing”不通顺）。建议先提出具体改进项，再解释这些改动的好处，使用合适的连接词并简洁表达。

Ví dụ: I would like the campus to update its facilities, for example by adding a modern library and more dedicated quiet study rooms. I’d also welcome more recreational spaces and greenery, because they would make the campus more relaxing and improve student well-being.

Gợi ý: 内容目标明确，但表述不够准确（“master degree in a broad”不正确）且有代词不一致（使用“us”而非“I”）。建议先直接说明计划（例如攻读硕士并可能留学），然后具体说明原因和预期收获，保持人称一致并用连接词衔接观点。

Ví dụ: I plan to pursue a master’s degree, possibly abroad, because specializing will give me advanced knowledge and skills. Studying overseas would also provide valuable international exposure and broaden my career opportunities.

× I chose these files because I have a name interested in how businesses operate and I want to start my own company someday.

✓ I chose this field because I am interested in how businesses operate and I want to start my own company someday.

句中“these files”和“have a name interested”是错误用法。应使用“this field”（这个专业/领域）而不是“these files”，并且主语应用“I am interested”（我是感兴趣的），而不是“have a name interested”。建议：注意常见固定搭配，如 be interested in，和单数/固定短语的正确表达。

× My daily routine involves studying and participating in some extra query.

✓ My daily routine involves studying and participating in some extra activities.

句中“participating in some extra query”中“query”不合适，语义上应为“activities”或“sessions”。另外，动词 involve 后应跟动名词（studying）是正确的，本句只需替换不当名词。建议：确认搭配名词的语义是否合适，常用搭配如 extra activities / extracurricular activities。

× I usually study umm, the university campus, their dedicated study areas and well equipped computer labs which make it particularly convenient to meet others professors and some classmates for group projects.

✓ I usually study on the university campus, in the dedicated study areas and in well-equipped computer labs, which make it particularly convenient to meet other professors and classmates for group projects.

问题包括介词使用不当（应为 study on the campus, in the study areas/labs）、形容词拼写/连字符（well-equipped）、以及“others professors”应为“other professors”。建议：注意介词短语的位置和搭配，形容词复合词用连字符，other 后直接接名词复数。

× Yes, definitely. It's a very good place, place to study. It is conducive to academic work, and it is very convenient to have to have group projects and tutoring.

✓ Yes, definitely. It's a very good place to study. It is conducive to academic work, and it is very convenient for group projects and tutoring.

句中重复“place, place”和短语“convenient to have to have”是错误与冗余，用法应为 convenient for + 名词/动名词，不用“have to have”。建议：简化句子，使用固定搭配如 convenient for。

× I would appreciate it if we can have more updated facilities like the modern libraries and some dedicated study area.

✓ I would appreciate it if we could have more up-to-date facilities, such as modern libraries and some dedicated study areas.

条件句中礼貌表达通常用虚拟语气，用 could 而不是 can；“updated”不如“up-to-date”自然；“area”应为复数以匹配泛指。建议：条件礼貌请求用 would appreciate if we could ...，并注意形容词短语和名词单复数一致。

× Additionally, more recreational area and greenery places would help us help the campus relaxing.

✓ Additionally, more recreational areas and green spaces would help make the campus more relaxing.

问题包括名词单复数（area->areas）、“greenery places”应为“green spaces”，以及动词短语错误“help us help the campus relaxing”应为 “help make the campus more relaxing”。建议：注意可数名词复数形式，常用搭配如 green spaces，和 help 做使役动词的用法：help (someone) do sth 或 help make sth adj。

× I intend to pursue a master degree in a broad since specializing in a particular area will help us gain advanced knowledge and skills and enhance our career prospects.

✓ I intend to pursue a master's degree in broad subjects since specializing in a particular area will help me gain advanced knowledge and skills and enhance my career prospects.

句中“master degree”需用所有格或复合名词“master's degree”；“in a broad”不完整，应为“in broad subjects”或“in a broad field”；另外人称应与整体陈述一致，前句用“I”应把后面的“us”改为“me/my”。建议：注意学位表达形式，修补不完整的介词短语，并保持主语人称一致。

× What's more, studying abroad helps us gain international exposure.

✓ What's more, studying abroad helps me gain international exposure.

句中“helps us”与前文“I intend...”的人称不一致，应改为“helps me”。建议：保持人称一致，若主语是 I，应使用 me/my。