Study— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Be more concise and natural: begin with a direct topic sentence, then give one specific reason with a linking phrase. Avoid vague phrasing like "the knowledge is interesting to me."

Ví dụ: I'm an undergraduate student majoring in Marketing. I enjoy it because the courses combine consumer psychology and data analysis, which suit my interests and career goals.

Gợi ý: Start with a clear topic sentence and give a precise supporting detail. Avoid weak hedging like "I think" and correct article use: say "at the University of Macau."

Ví dụ: I study at the University of Macau, which is the largest university in the region and has extensive research facilities in business and marketing.

Gợi ý: Use polite, neutral language and correct grammar. Give a clear topic sentence, then a specific reason with a linking word. Avoid vague or potentially insensitive statements; say "many classes are taught in Chinese" if that is the point.

Ví dụ: Personally, I don't find it ideal for me because many classes are taught in Chinese, and I would prefer a campus where most lectures are in English to improve my language skills.

Gợi ý: Answer directly, use linking words, and be specific about the problem and a suggested improvement. Remove filler words like "Umm."

Ví dụ: Yes. For example, I would improve the classroom ventilation and air conditioning because the rooms often feel stuffy, which makes it hard to concentrate during long lectures.

Gợi ý: Give a clear, grammatical response: state your plan first, then brief reasons. Use linking phrases such as "after that" or "so I plan to." Avoid uncertain phrasing like "may be finished."

Ví dụ: I plan to complete my final year here and then enter the workforce rather than pursue a master's degree, because I want to gain practical experience in marketing right after graduation.

× I'm currently an undergraduate student and my major is marketing.

✓ I'm currently an undergraduate student and my major is marketing.

No grammatical correction needed; sentence is correct. Keep present simple for general facts (state of being and major).

× I really love my major because the knowledge is interesting to me.

✓ I really love my major because the subject matter is interesting to me.

Use a more natural noun phrase: 'the knowledge' is awkward in this context; 'subject matter' or 'the content' is preferred. This improves word choice and fluency.

× I study in the University of Macau and this is the biggest university in Macau, I think.

✓ I study at the University of Macau, and it is the largest university in Macau, I think.

Use preposition 'at' with institutions and the definite article 'the' before 'University of Macau'. Also split into two clauses with a comma before the coordinating conjunction and use 'largest' (more natural than 'biggest' in this context).

× To be honest, University of Macau is not quite a good place to study there because there are too much Chinese people and I prefer studying in an English condition school.

✓ To be honest, the University of Macau is not a very good place to study because there are too many Chinese people, and I prefer studying in a school where English is the medium of instruction.

Several issues: add the definite article 'the' before 'University of Macau'; do not add redundant 'there' after 'study'; use 'many' with countable plural 'Chinese people' (not 'much'); rephrase 'English condition school' to 'a school where English is the medium of instruction' for clarity and correctness.

× Umm yes, I hope that the school can have a better environment for the lecture because the air conditioning is not good there and is always stuffy in the classroom and this can be improved.

✓ Yes, I hope the school can provide a better environment for lectures because the air conditioning is not good and the classrooms are often stuffy; this can be improved.

Remove filler 'Umm'; use plural 'lectures' if referring generally; avoid redundant 'there' and repeat subjects clearly: 'air conditioning is not good' stands alone; use 'classrooms are often stuffy' for subject-verb agreement and clarity; combine ideas with semicolon or shorter sentences.

× My future study plans may be finished the last year of my university here then I don't have any future plans for keep studying through my master. I probably will work after I graduate.

✓ My future study plan is to finish my final year at this university; I do not plan to continue to a master's program. I will probably work after I graduate.

Original has several tense and structure errors: 'may be finished the last year' is ungrammatical — use 'is to finish my final year' for intention; 'don't have any future plans for keep studying through my master' should be 'do not plan to continue to a master's program'; use 'will probably' for future intention and maintain subject-verb agreement.