Study— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: 句子结构混乱，信息表达不清晰。应直接回答身份并用一到两句补充：说明学校名称和专业时注意词序与单复数、冠词与介词的使用；发音上注意学校名称和专业词汇的清晰度。练习把信息组织成简短自然的句子，避免不必要的重复。

Ví dụ: I'm a student at Shandong University of Finance and Economics. I major in Aesthetics.

Gợi ý: 回答包含关键信息但有发音和词汇错误（如"Set"和学校名不一致）。应直接说所在学校，并补充年级作为一到两句信息。注意不要在句首使用多余的填充词，保持流畅。

Ví dụ: I study at Shandong University of Finance and Economics, and I'm a third-year student there.

Gợi ý: 表达意思可以理解但句子不够自然，有语法错误（如"my the university"）和不连贯的结构。应先给直接评价，再用一到两句具体理由支持，使用连接词如"because"或"so"使逻辑更清晰。

Ví dụ: Yes, it's a great place to study because there is a strong academic atmosphere and many students study late in the library.

Gợi ý: 回答含义模糊且语法错误多（例如时态与词汇错误："I hoped to my ski"）。应用现在/将来时表达希望的改变，明确列出一两项需要改进的设施，并用连接词说明原因和期望效果。

Ví dụ: Yes, I would like the university to improve the computer equipment in the evening and upgrade the library facilities so students can study more comfortably.

Gợi ý: 回答表达不连贯且词不达意。应直接说明计划：想读硕士并说明具体专业（e.g., data science or artificial intelligence），并简要解释原因或兴趣。注意用完整句子并避免无意义的填充词。

Ví dụ: I plan to pursue a master's degree in data science or artificial intelligence because I'm interested in data analysis and mathematics.

× A family students Ayana Shandong University of Financial and Economics.

✓ I am a student. My name is Ayana. I study at Shandong University of Finance and Economics.

原句代词和主语使用不正确且句子碎片化。“A family students”没有意义，应使用第一人称“I am a student”。大学名称拼写和词序也需调整。建议用完整句子介绍自己：先说身份，再说姓名，再说学校。

× My major is aesthetics.

✓ My major is Aesthetics.

专业名称作为专有名词首字母大写更规范（写作上）。句子语法上正确，但注意专有名词大小写和发音。中文建议：专业名作为专有名词首字母大写。

× Set I'm a third year student at Shannon University of Finance and Economics.

✓ Yes, I'm a third-year student at Shandong University of Finance and Economics.

原句“Set”应为“yes”或“so”等确认词；“third year”作形容词时用连字符“third-year”；大学名称应为“Shandong”，且句子需流畅完整。中文建议：答话时先用简短确认词，然后用连字符连接序数词与year。

× Yes, my the university is very full of study environments and many students, uh study in the night in library.

✓ Yes, the university has a very good study environment, and many students study in the library at night.

原句中“my the university”重复使用限定词，应改为“the university”。“full of study environments”表达不自然，改为“has a very good study environment”。“study in the night in library”词序错误，应为“study in the library at night”。中文建议：避免冠词重复，使用自然的固定搭配（have a good study environment；study in the library at night）。

× I hoped to my ski can improve the computer equipment by the night and the, uh, improve the library facilities.

✓ I hope the school can improve the computer equipment in the dormitories and also improve the library facilities.

原句语序混乱且单词错误（“ski”应为“school”或“school”拼写错误），时态不当（希望用一般现在时“hope”而非过去式“hoped”）。“by the night”表达不自然，应具体说明地点如“in the dormitories”或改为“by night”但不合上下文。中文建议：表达愿望时用一般现在时hope，注意单词拼写并选择合适的地点短语。

× I have to look at uh master degree and I want to study data science and artificial. Umm, I say it's another problem. Feels like the data and science obvious and mathematics.

✓ I am going to apply for a master's degree, and I want to study data science and artificial intelligence. I think it also involves mathematics and statistics.

原句中时态和搭配混乱：用“have to look at master degree”不自然，改为“am going to apply for a master's degree”或“I want to pursue a master's degree”。“artificial.”不完整，应为“artificial intelligence”。后半部分句子碎片“Feels like the data and science obvious and mathematics”缺少主语和谓语，需改为完整句并明确意思。中文建议：使用标准表达如“apply for a master's degree”或“pursue a master's degree”，写完整学科名称“artificial intelligence”，并用完整句说明与数学的关系。