Study— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: 回答要更直接并保持自然，句子不宜太长或重复信息。注意时态和用词（例如“such high school”不自然，“open study”错误），并使用1-2个连接词补充细节。建议把内容控制在最多五句内，避免与后续问题重复。

Ví dụ: I'm a high school student. I usually wake up at 6:00 and study until about 10:00 pm to keep up with my classes. Because I prefer learning independently, I often solve problems on my own rather than asking for help. This routine helps me stay focused and improve steadily.

Gợi ý: 信息要准确且言简意赅，避免夸张或不一致的细节（例如90平方公里不可信且与后文10平方公里冲突）。句子应完整，注意语法和拼写错误，使用连接词使描述连贯。

Ví dụ: I study at Sunshine School, a well-regarded high school in my city. The campus is quite large, so students often use bicycles to travel between buildings. The school is known for strong academic performance and many graduates attending top universities.

Gợi ý: 回答应简洁有力，避免重复先前内容。可以先给出直接观点，再用一两条具体理由支持。用连接词（for example, because）使结构清晰。

Ví dụ: Yes, it's a great place to study because it offers rigorous academic programs and excellent teachers. For example, many alumni have been admitted to leading universities, which motivates current students.

Gợi ý: 回答要避免自相矛盾的数字，并用更自然的表达说明期望的改变和原因。不要提到电动车可能的安全或管理问题（除非补充理由）。保持一至两句提出改变，再给出具体理由或例子。

Ví dụ: I would like the school to provide more bicycles or a shuttle service because the campus is very large. This would save time and make it easier for students to get to classes quickly.

Gợi ý: 要注意时态和逻辑一致性（例如“apply last year”错误）。先直接回答计划，再说明具体专业和行动步骤。避免拼写和缩略词错误（如“MAR marketing”不清楚），并给出清晰的时间或准备计划。

Ví dụ: I plan to pursue a master's degree in business to deepen my knowledge and enhance my career prospects. Next year I will prepare my applications and take online courses in marketing to strengthen my background.

× I'm a student at such high school.

✓ I'm a student at such a high school.

句子缺少不定冠词“a”，在表示“一所（某种类型的）高中”时需要使用“a/ an”。建议：在可数单数名词前加上适当的冠词。

× I wake up every morning at 6:00 and open study until around 10:00 at night because I want to keep up with my classes.

✓ I wake up every morning at 6:00 and study until around 10:00 at night because I want to keep up with my classes.

原句中“open study”是不正确的词组用法，动词短语应为“study”（学习），不需要“open”。建议：去掉多余词汇，用正确动词表达动作。

× I usually work hard and don't rely on others much as I prefer to solve problems by myself.

✓ I usually work hard and don't rely on others much because I prefer to solve problems by myself.

使用连词时应使用表示原因的“because”而不是“as”（虽然as也可表示原因，但在口语中更常用because以避免歧义）。建议：用更清晰的因果连词“because”。

× I study at Sunshine School, one of the most prestigious high schools in China.

✓ I study at Sunshine School, one of the most prestigious high schools in China.

该句无明显定冠词错误，保留原句即可。

× The campus is huge, It covers about 90 square kilometers, so we often need bikes to get from one building to another.

✓ The campus is huge. It covers about 90 square kilometers, so we often need bikes to get from one building to another.

原句存在大小写与连接问题。“It”不应大写紧接逗号后，且句子过长最好分为两句。建议：用句号分开，并注意大写规则。

× The school is well known for its strong academic results and many successful.

✓ The school is well known for its strong academic results and many successful graduates.

句子缺少名词“graduates”使“many successful”不完整。建议：补全名词以使表达完整。

× Of course, my school is well known for its strong academic results and many successful graduates who belong to top universities, and my school is one of the most prestigious schools in China.

✓ Of course, my school is well known for its strong academic results and many successful graduates who attend top universities. It is one of the most prestigious schools in China.

原句重复提到“my school”，且“belong to top universities”用词不自然。建议：避免重复，使用“attend”或“go to”表示“就读/进入大学”。

× I hope there will be more bicycles and motorbikes in my school because it's very huge.

✓ I hope there will be more bicycles and motorbikes at my school because it's very large.

地点介词应为“at my school”而不是“in my school”；另外“huge”可以，但“large”在描述校园面积时更自然。建议：介词用“at”，并选择更合适的形容词。

× It covers about 10 square kilometers, so we often have to ride bikes from one being to another.

✓ It covers about 10 square kilometers, so we often have to ride bikes from one building to another.

单词“being”拼写错误，应为“building”。建议：注意拼写并使用正确名词。

× For example, I will apply for a masters program in business last year and I also want to take some online course about MAR marketing.

✓ For example, I applied for a master's program in business last year, and I also want to take some online courses about marketing.

原句时间表达混乱：既有“will apply”（将申请）又有“last year”（去年），时态不一致。应使用过去时“applied”表示去年已申请；“masters”需要所有格“master's”；“course”需复数“courses”（如果想说一些课程）；“MAR marketing”不明确，改为通用“marketing”。建议：统一时态，修正名词形式并使用清晰词汇。