Study— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: 用更自然、简洁的句子直接回答并把细节按逻辑组织。避免停顿词（如 uh）和冗长表述，学科用复数或并列结构更清晰。可以先一句话概括身份，再补充专业方向。

Ví dụ: I'm a high school student in the Experimental High School's International Department. I focus mainly on biology and chemistry.

Gợi ý: 回答时先直接说明学校名称/部门，然后用连接词给出具体原因。注意语序和冠词使用，避免重复。句子不要太长，分两句更清晰。

Ví dụ: I study at the Experimental High School's International Department. I chose it because it's close to my home and the transport is very convenient.

Gợi ý: 表达时要更具体并使用连贯的连接词，避免语法错误（如 there have → there is/there are）。提供清楚的例子并解释为什么有利于学习。删除多余短语，避免不明意思的句子。

Ví dụ: Yes, it's a good place to study because there is a strong academic atmosphere. For example, the school has a well-structured timetable that helps students manage their time and improve steadily.

Gợi ý: 先明确列出希望改进的项目，然后具体说明原因和影响。注意形容词和名词搭配（better conditions 而不是 more good conditions）。避免重复并用一到两句说明优先顺序。

Ví dụ: Yes, I would like the school to improve its infrastructure, especially the toilets and some of the desks. Better facilities would make the environment more comfortable and help students concentrate more.

Gợi ý: 回答要清晰有条理，先说主要计划，再说明短期目标。避免模糊表达（maybe immigration）和口头语（umm）。用具体时间或步骤让表述更可信。

Ví dụ: I plan to attend university abroad and possibly settle there later. For now, my priority is to prepare for several important exams in my department.

× I'm a high school student in the Experimental High School International Apartment and uh, besides that, I mainly studied in the biology and uh, chemistry.

✓ I'm a high school student in the Experimental High School International Department, and besides that, I mainly study biology and chemistry.

句中有代词/短语和时态不一致问题：“studied”使用了过去式，与上下文（现在仍在学习）不符，应使用一般现在时“study”。另外，“Apartment”应为“Department”（名词使用错误属于词汇但与代词/短语搭配相关），需改为“Department”。建议：保持时态一致，描述目前正在学习的科目用一般现在时。

× I study in experimental high school international department because here is not far away from my home and the transport is very convenient for me, so I choose here for my school.

✓ I study in the Experimental High School International Department because it is not far from my home and the transport is very convenient for me, so I chose this school.

句中时态与表达意图不一致：开头使用现在时“study”表示现在就读，但句末“so I choose here for my school”应表达“我选择这所学校（过去做出的决定）”，因此改为过去式“chose”。另外，代词和固定搭配需调整：“here is not far away from my home”改为“it is not far from my home”；“choose here for my school”改为“chose this school”。建议：区分描述当前状态（现在时）与过去决策（过去时），并使用合适的代词指代学校。

× Yes, I think it is a good place for student because there have a strong atmosphere.

✓ Yes, I think it is a good place for students because there is a strong atmosphere.

原句中“student”应为复数“students”以泛指学生群体；“there have a strong atmosphere”主语-谓语不匹配，正确结构为“There is a strong atmosphere.” 建议：使用“There is/are”结构时注意主语单复数，并确保主谓一致。

× For example, uh, we also have a reasonable timetable to arrange our classes and you can throw this to improve yourself.

✓ For example, we also have a reasonable timetable to arrange our classes, and you can use this to improve yourself.

句中“throw this”是错误搭配，应为“use this”或“take advantage of this”；“to arrange our classes”搭配正确。错误属于动词使用和固定搭配问题（动词+ing在此句中不是核心问题，但按清单最接近为动词用法）。建议：学习常见搭配，用“use/take advantage of”来表达“利用这个（时间表）”。

× Definitely I would like our place to improve the infrastructure, especially our toilet.

✓ Definitely I would like our school to improve the infrastructure, especially the toilets.

原句中“our place to improve”用法不自然，主语需为学校等机构；“toilet”应用复数“toilets”若指多个或设施总体；此外语义上更自然表达为“I would like our school to improve...” 属情态动词/愿望表达的搭配问题。建议：将“place”替换为“school”，并根据是否指多间厕所使用复数。

× I think we should have a more good conditions at here and our desk.

✓ I think we should have better conditions here, including our desks.

“a more good conditions”结构错误，比较级应直接用“better”而不是“more good”；“at here”不正确，正确为“here”；“our desk”如果指多位学生应为复数“desks”。建议：使用比较级“better”，注意副词/介词短语的位置（“here”），并使名词单复数一致。

× I plan to go to the university abroad and uh, after that I maybe immigration, but first I want to focus on umm, my some important exams on our department.

✓ I plan to go to university abroad, and after that I may immigrate, but first I want to focus on some important exams in our department.

句中“maybe immigration”用法错误，应使用情态动词+动词（may immigrate）；“go to the university abroad”通常说法为“go to university abroad”或“go to a university abroad”；“my some important exams”词序错误，应为“some important exams”；“on our department”介词错误，应为“in our department”。建议：使用情态动词+动词形式，注意词序和介词搭配。