Study— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: 回答较完整，但存在重复、语法和表达不够简洁的问题。建议：1) 开头用一句明确的主题句回答（例如‘I am a third-year high school student.’）。2) 避免重复词（如“really really”），用更精确的词替代。3) 将目的和计划分成简短句子，注意语法（如'in order to' 的位置）。4) 控制句子数量，最多五句且自然衔接。

Ví dụ: I am a third-year high school student. I study hard because I plan to apply to my top-choice university. To strengthen my application, I am preparing for standardized tests and aiming to earn a few professional certificates to make my profile more competitive.

Gợi ý: 总体信息明确，但句子有冗余和语法错误。建议：1) 使用简洁的地点描述（例如‘in Taichung, central Taiwan’），避免重复‘which is’结构。2) 注意主谓一致（'teachers... provide'而不是 'provides'）。3) 用一两句具体说明学校优点，避免情感词过多重复。

Ví dụ: I study at Washington High School in Taichung, in central Taiwan. It’s a great school because the teachers are friendly and supportive, and the school offers many learning resources like a library and well-equipped labs.

Gợi ý: 回答重复且口语填充词较多，需更自然且简洁。建议：1) 用一两句直接回答并给出具体理由。2) 避免重复词和停顿（如 'it is it is'、'very, very'、'super'）。3) 使用连接词（e.g. 'because', 'and')使逻辑更清楚。

Ví dụ: Yes, it is. The teachers are very supportive, which makes studying much easier, and the school provides useful resources such as modern labs and a well-stocked library. There are also many online courses and materials available to students.

Gợi ý: 回答表达不够地道且语法和用词有问题。建议：1) 用更自然的表达说明想要的改变（例如‘improve the cafeteria’而不是‘maintain a new cafeteria’）。2) 说明具体原因并给出可行建议（如提供更多健康、经济的选择）。3) 避免笼统或重复，保持一句主题句加一句具体理由即可。

Ví dụ: I would like the school to improve the cafeteria by offering healthier and more affordable meal options. Recently there have been concerns about unhealthy cooking oil, so introducing clearer food standards and more vegetable-based dishes would help.

Gợi ý: 回答含糊且有语法错误，表达不够具体。建议：1) 用一两句明确计划（例如'aim to achieve high exam scores and earn certificates'）。2) 提供具体行动（如‘attend extra classes, hire a tutor, study schedule’）。3) 避免模糊用词（如 'maybe'、'really wish myself can'），使用更确定的语气。

Ví dụ: My plan is to achieve high exam scores to get into my chosen university. To do that, I will follow a strict study schedule, attend extra tutorial classes, and prepare for a few professional certificates to strengthen my application.

× I am currently a student and I am in my third year of high school.

✓ I am currently a student in my third year of high school.

句子中使用了重复的结构“I am ... and I am ...”，造成冗余。将两部分合并为一句更自然。针对时态并无错误，但属于句子结构和表达不自然，应简化为单句。建议合并主语和表语，避免重复的be动词。

× In addition to do this, I really want to get some more certificates in order to make myself competitive.

✓ In addition to doing this, I really want to get some more certificates in order to make myself competitive.

介词短语'in addition to'后面应接动名词(doing)，而不是不定式(do)。因此应将do改为doing。建议记住介词後需用动名词。

× I study in a high school named Washington High School, which is located in Taichung, which is in the middle of Taiwan. I think that's a very, very good place because the teachers are friendly and provides a lot of learning resources.

✓ I study at a high school named Washington High School, which is located in Taichung, in the middle of Taiwan. I think that's a very, very good place because the teachers are friendly and provide a lot of learning resources.

动词provide的主语是复数'the teachers'，因此动词应使用原形provide而不是第三人称单数provides。另外介系詞搭配更常用'study at a school'而非'study in a school'，以及重复的'which is'可以简化。建议注意主谓一致：复数主语用动词原形或复数形式。

× Yet it is it is a very, very good place to study.

✓ Yes, it is a very, very good place to study.

句首使用'Yet'语义不合适，且出现了重复'it is it is'。将'Yet'改为肯定回答'Yes'并去掉重复，使句子语义明确且结构正确。建议在口语中避免重复并选用恰当的连接词。

× the school provides us many useful resources like libraries or modern labs.

✓ the school provides us with many useful resources like libraries and modern labs.

动词provide用于表达“提供...给...”时通常用provide sb with sth结构，而不是provide sb sth。因此应改为'provides us with'。另外并列项用'and'更自然，'or'不恰当。建议记住provide with的固定搭配。

× I would like my school to maintain a new cafeteria to provide more healthy and affordable meals because these days the problem of bad oil has become worse, so I really wish that my school can eliminate this problem.

✓ I would like my school to build a new cafeteria to provide healthier and more affordable meals because recently the problem of bad oil has become worse, so I really hope that my school can eliminate this problem.

原句中'use of maintain a new cafeteria'不自然，maintain通常指维持而非建造，应使用build或have。'more healthy'应为比較級或用healthier，且'can'與'wish'搭配不自然，應用'hope'。另外时间表达'days'改为'recently'更地道。建议注意动词搭配和代词/动词选择的自然用法。

× For my upcoming study plans, I really wish myself can get an excellent score and in order to apply in an ideal university.

✓ For my upcoming study plans, I really hope I can get an excellent score in order to apply to an ideal university.

英语中'wish oneself can'是不正确的结构，应该使用hope I can。此外，apply的搭配为apply to a university，而不是apply in。建议用hope + 从句表达愿望，记住apply to的固定搭配。

× So to do this I will maybe get some more professional certificates in order to make myself more competitive.

✓ So to do this I may get some more professional certificates in order to make myself more competitive.

口语中'maybe'位置不当，且与情态动词搭配更自然。将'maybe'替换为情态动词'may'放在谓语前更符合英语语序。此修改涉及情态动词使用和副词位置，建议将不确定性放在情态动词上（may/could）或将'maybe'置于句首。