Study— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: 句子有语法和流利度问题。回答要直接简洁地表明身份，避免重复并注意时态和冠词。可以用一两句补充学校类型或年级，但总句数不超过5句。

Ví dụ: I'm a high school student. I attend an international high school where classes are taught in English, and I'm currently in Year 11.

Gợi ý: 信息前后矛盾，表达不清且有代词错误（his school）。回答时要先给出地点概述，然后用一两个具体细节支持，注意一致性和代词使用。

Ví dụ: I study at a suburban school about 15 to 20 minutes from my home. Although it's outside the city center, it's still conveniently close for me.

Gợi ý: 回答冗长且有重复与词汇错误（few clock）。应先给出直接判断，然后用2个清晰的支持理由，使用连接词使逻辑更连贯。

Ví dụ: Yes, it's a good place to study because it's quiet and there is little traffic. As a result, I can concentrate better in class and on my homework.

Gợi ý: 回答内容明确但句子结构不正确且有时态问题。先直接回答是否希望改进，然后列出1–2具体问题并说明影响，使用连接词使表达更流畅。

Ví dụ: Yes, I would like some changes. For example, transportation is inconvenient for many students, so better bus services are needed, and the drainage system should be improved because roads flood when it rains.

Gợi ý: 句子语法和时态混乱，表达不清。应先用一句话清晰说明计划，然后补充具体细节如学科与地点，注意动词形式和连贯性。

Ví dụ: I plan to complete Year 11 at my current high school and then go to the UK to study engineering at university.

× I'm a student in I studying in high school. I studying in an international high school.

✓ I'm a student. I am studying in an international high school.

原句有句子结构和时态使用错误："I'm a student in I studying..." 是断句和重复，且动词缺少助动词"am"。建议将意思拆成两句，使用现在进行时表示正在学习："I am studying"。简明建议：把多余或重复的词去掉，主语后跟正确的be动词（am/is/are）。

× I'm studying in a school which is quite far from the city center, but it's quite near.

✓ I'm studying at a school which is quite far from the city center, but it's quite near to my home.

原句时态本身无误，但介词使用不当：英文中通常说"study at a school"，且句子中"near"后应明确靠近的对象（如"to my home"）。建议使用正确介词并补全信息。

× It is near my home, so it usually takes me only about 15 to 20 minutes to reach his school.

✓ It is near my home, so it usually takes me only about 15 to 20 minutes to reach the school.

原句使用了错误的人称代词"his"，与上下文不符。应使用指示代词或定冠词"the school"来指代前文提到的学校。简明建议：检查代词与先行词的指代一致性。

× Yes, of course it is quite far from the city center, so the neighbors are very quiet and there is still there is not too much traffic to disturb us.

✓ Yes, of course. It is quite far from the city center, so the neighborhood is very quiet and there is not too much traffic to disturb us.

原句存在重复短语（"there is still there is not"）和措辞不当。把句子拆分并用正确名词"neighborhood"表示社区，删除重复部分，使句子通顺。建议读句子时注意不要重复，并保持主谓一致。

× The area feels peaceful overall because there are few clock, fewer cars in less noise.

✓ The area feels peaceful overall because there are few people, fewer cars and less noise.

原句中"clock"显然用错词，应为表示人或活动的词（如people）；并列项的量词需区分可数与不可数：people（可数）用"few"/"fewer"，cars（可数）用"fewer"，noise（不可数）用"less"。建议学习可数/不可数名词与对应量词的用法。

× Is the school we attend is far from city center so transportation is inconvenient for most students and they have to live on campus.

✓ The school we attend is far from the city center, so transportation is inconvenient for most students and they have to live on campus.

原句有重复助动结构（开头用了疑问形式"Is"，但句子为陈述句），应去掉句首的"Is"。另外缺少定冠词"the"用于"city center"。建议根据句子意图选择陈述或疑问句，并使用正确冠词。

× Also the drainage system in our school is not good so when it was raining the road was always filled with water.

✓ Also, the drainage system at our school is not good, so when it rains the roads are always filled with water.

时态和冠词需调整：描述习惯性或反复发生的情况应使用一般现在时（"when it rains"）而非过去时；"road"应为复数或用定冠词视情况改为"the roads"或"the road"。另外地点介词用"at our school"更自然。建议区分一般现在时与过去时，用于描述常态和重复事件时用现在时。

× I plan to finish my 11 course in the previous high school and afterwards I make went to UK to study engineering in the university.

✓ I plan to finish my 11th course at my current high school, and afterwards I will go to the UK to study engineering at university.

原句有多处问题：序数词需用"11th"表示年级或课程；"previous high school"与上下文冲突，应为"current"或"my high school"；动词时态混乱（"make went"错误），表示将来计划应使用"will"或"plan to"后接不定式"go"；地名前需加冠词"the UK"，以及常用搭配为"study engineering at university"或"at a university"。建议学习序数词、时态表达未来计划的正确结构以及固定搭配（the UK, study ... at university）。