Study— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Cevap daha doğrudan ve dilbilgisi açısından düzgün olmalı. Kısa ve doğal bir konu cümlesiyle başlayın, ardından nedenlerinizi iki kısa destekleyici cümle ile bağla. Dilbilgisi hatalarını (ör. "I interested" → "I'm interested", "Bill Kent" → "Bilkent", "my department is economic" → "I study economics") düzeltin ve gereksiz tekrarları kaldırın.

Ví dụ: I'm a student at Bilkent University, and I study economics. I'm interested in economics because I enjoy analyzing how markets work. Because of that interest, I chose the economics department to prepare for a career in finance.

Gợi ý: Cümleleriniz karışık ve tekrarlar var; daha akıcı ve doğru kelime seçimi kullanın. 'Language reputation in on the world' gibi ifadeler düzeltilmeli. Erasmus ve yurt dışı imkanlarından bahsederken somut ve kısa örnekler verin. Bağlaçlar (for example, because) kullanarak mantığı netleştirin.

Ví dụ: I study at Bilkent University, which has a strong reputation in Turkey and internationally for its language programs. For example, the university offers many exchange opportunities like Erasmus, so students can study abroad easily.

Gợi ý: Cevabınızda mantıklı ve açık ifadeler kullanın; anlam bozukluklarını düzeltin ('Pilates' yerine 'plenty' veya 'politics' gibi doğru kelime). Gereksiz tekrarları çıkarın ve iki kısa destekleyici neden verin (ör. güçlü bölümler, öğrenci imkanları).

Ví dụ: From my perspective, Bilkent is one of the best universities in Turkey because its departments are strong and it offers plenty of opportunities for students, such as internships and student societies.

Gợi ý: Cevabınız açık ama fazla tekrar ediyor ve bazı dilbilgisi hataları var. Kısa ve doğrudan bir başlangıç cümlesiyle 'no' görüşünüzü belirtin, sonra iki neden verin. Tekrarlardan kaçının ve 'Bilkent' ismini doğru yazın.

Ví dụ: No, I wouldn't want any major changes because I'm happy at Bilkent. The faculty is excellent and there are many opportunities for internships and career development.

Gợi ý: Cevap net değil ve dilbilgisi hataları fazla ('I need out of study plans' anlamlı değil, 'became' yanlış form). Net bir gelecek planı ifade edin: hedef, sebep ve nasıl hazırlanacağınızı kısaça açıklayın. Ayrıca meslek seçiminizi daha doğru terimlerle verin ('salesman' yerine 'sales professional' veya daha spesifik).

Ví dụ: My plan is to continue my studies and then move to the United States to start a career in sales in New York. To achieve this, I plan to improve my English, take marketing courses, and apply for internships that will help me gain experience.

× I'm a student in Bill Kent University and my department is economic.

✓ I'm a student at Bilkent University and my department is economics.

Use 'at' for institutions and the proper name 'Bilkent'. 'Department' takes the subject name in noun form: 'economics', not the adjective 'economic'. Also use the correct preposition 'at' for studying at a university.

× Uh, I interested in economics.

✓ I am interested in economics.

The verb 'interest' requires the auxiliary 'be' in the passive-like adjective construction 'interested'. In present simple, use 'I am interested'.

× Uh, for this reason, I preferred my profession on the economic department.

✓ For this reason, I chose my profession in the economics department.

Use 'chose' (past of 'choose') or 'prefer' depending on meaning; here 'chose' fits. Use 'in the economics department' not 'on the economic department'. Use 'economics' as the department name.

× I am studying at Bilkent University and it has a great reputation in Turkey and also it has a good uh language reputation in on the world.

✓ I am studying at Bilkent University; it has a great reputation in Turkey and a good reputation for languages in the world.

Avoid repeating 'it has'. Use 'reputation for languages' to express language reputation. Remove incorrect preposition 'in on the world' and use 'in the world' or 'around the world'.

× For this reason I prefer Bill Kent and Bill Kent has a lot of go to abroad and Erasmus occupation.

✓ For this reason I prefer Bilkent; Bilkent has many opportunities to go abroad and participate in the Erasmus program.

Use 'opportunities to go abroad' and 'participate in the Erasmus program'. 'Go to abroad' is incorrect; 'Erasmus occupation' is wrong — use 'Erasmus program' or 'Erasmus opportunities'.

× For my from my perspective, Bill Kent is the best one in the Turkey because in Bilkent university departments are so good and also Pilates too much opportunities.

✓ From my perspective, Bilkent is the best university in Turkey because its departments are very good and it has many opportunities for students.

Remove redundant 'for my from my', use correct article 'in Turkey' not 'the Turkey', correct word order 'Bilkent University' and fix unclear phrase 'Pilates too much opportunities' to 'it has many opportunities for students'.

× Actually, I don't want any change, uh, because I am happy with Bill Kent and Bill Kent is one of the best place, uh, for economic and management.

✓ Actually, I don't want any changes because I am happy with Bilkent; Bilkent is one of the best places for economics and management.

Use plural 'changes' and 'places'. Use 'economics' (subject) and correct preposition 'for economics and management'.

× For this reason, my teachers and opportunities are very good.

✓ For this reason, my teachers and the opportunities are very good.

Add definite article 'the' before 'opportunities' to refer to specific opportunities at the university. The original sentence was mostly acceptable but needed the article for clarity.

× Actually, I need out of study plans and study because I want to go to America and I I'm going to became a salesman in New York.

✓ Actually, I need a study plan because I want to go to America, and I'm going to become a salesman in New York.

Correct phrase 'need a study plan'. Remove duplicated 'I'. Use 'become' (infinitive) not 'became' (past). Ensure parallel structure and punctuation.

× That's my dream. For this reason, I need very good study plans.

✓ That's my dream. For this reason, I need very good study plans.

Sentence is fine but keep consistent singular/plural: earlier 'study plan' vs 'study plans' — choose plural 'study plans' if plural is intended. No grammar change required here.