Study— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Старайтесь давать короткий прямой ответ сначала, затем добавлять 1–2 поддерживающие фразы с конкретикой. Избегайте повторов («a lot of», «we and we») и грамматических ошибок в одной фразе. Улучшите связность, используйте союзы и исправную структуру предложений.

Ví dụ: I'm a student. My course is demanding but offers many opportunities to learn technical skills and develop discipline. For example, we have weekly labs and group projects that help me gain practical knowledge.

Gợi ý: Отвечайте прямо: назовите место и затем добавьте 1–2 конкретных факта. Не оставляйте предложение незаконченным, избегайте повторов «that school actually is so good and we have». Используйте связующие слова, чтобы сделать ответ логичным.

Ví dụ: I study at a specialized IT school. It has well-equipped computer labs and experienced instructors, which makes it a great place to learn programming and networking.

Gợi ý: Начните с прямого утверждения (Yes/No) и затем обоснуйте ответ с 1–2 конкретными причинами. Избегайте неуклюжих формулировок («we learn a lot of knowledge» — лучше «we gain a lot of knowledge»). Используйте связки (because, so, therefore) для ясности.

Ví dụ: Yes, it's a good place to study because the school enforces discipline and offers structured courses. As a result, students gain solid technical knowledge and improve their English communication skills.

Gợi ý: Давайте более развёрнутый ответ: сначала прямо ответьте (Yes/No/Maybe), потом укажите конкретное изменение и причину. Избегайте расплывчатых фраз «depends on director» без объяснения. Используйте условные конструкции, если нужно (e.g., I would like them to…).

Ví dụ: Maybe — I would like the school to extend library hours so students can study later. That would help those of us who have daytime classes and need quiet time in the evening.

Gợi ý: Отвечайте чётко и добавьте конкретику — почему вы выбрали эту область и какие шаги планируете предпринять. Исправьте порядок слов: «I would like to study…». Добавьте детали о направлении, университете или карьере, чтобы показать мотивацию.

Ví dụ: In the future I would like to study petroleum engineering or oil and gas engineering because I'm interested in energy technologies. I plan to apply to a university program and take internships with energy companies to gain practical experience.

× I'm a student and actually we have a lot of challenge and a lot of opportunity a lot of and we and we can a lot of knowledge and discipline. It's so hard.

✓ I'm a student and actually we have a lot of challenges and many opportunities; we can gain a lot of knowledge and discipline. It's very hard.

The original sentence has run-on structure, missing plural forms and unclear phrasing. Use plural 'challenges' and 'opportunities'. Combine ideas with appropriate punctuation and use verbs like 'gain' to express obtaining knowledge and discipline. Replace informal 'a lot of and we and we can a lot of knowledge' with 'we can gain a lot of knowledge'. Use 'very' instead of 'so' for clarity. Grammar problem type ID:26

× I study in IT school and that school actually is so good and we have.

✓ I study at an IT school and it is actually very good.

Use the preposition 'at' for attending a school and use the article 'an' before the vowel sound in 'IT'. The original ends abruptly with 'and we have' which is incomplete; remove it or complete the idea. Replace 'that school actually is so good' with 'it is actually very good' for natural phrasing. Grammar problem type ID:11

× Is that place good to study? Because they have discipline and we learn a lot of knowledge and we improve a lot of language.

✓ Yes, it is a good place to study because they enforce discipline; we learn a lot and improve our language skills.

Avoid starting a sentence with 'Because' as a fragment; combine with the main clause. Use 'enforce discipline' or 'have discipline' and use 'learn a lot' rather than 'learn a lot of knowledge'. Use 'improve our language skills' instead of 'improve a lot of language' for grammatical correctness and clarity. Grammar problem type ID:26

× I'm not sure, but it depends on director.

✓ I'm not sure, but it depends on the director.

Include the definite article 'the' before 'director' when referring to a specific person. The modal structure is fine but requires proper article usage to be grammatically correct. Grammar problem type ID:4

× In future I would like study in oil and gas.

✓ In the future I would like to study oil and gas.

The infinitive marker 'to' is missing after 'would like'. Also add the article 'the' before 'future' for natural timing ('in the future'). Use 'study oil and gas' or 'study in the oil and gas field'; include 'to' for correct verb construction. Grammar problem type ID:8