Study— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: 回答较直接但有语法和表达问题。注意时态与语法：用“I’m a college student and I’m about to graduate”更自然。可以加一两句补充信息，例如毕业时间或毕业后计划，但总体不要超过5句。练习用简洁的句子并避免多余词汇（如“recently”在此不合适）。

Ví dụ: I’m a college student, and I’m about to graduate next month. I’ve been focusing on finishing my final projects and preparing for job applications.

Gợi ý: 存在语法错误和重复词（"I'm study", "and and"）。应使用正确的动词形式："I study at..."，并在一句话内清楚表明学校和专业。可补充所在城市或系别作为细节，但句子总数不超过5句。

Ví dụ: I study at Nanyang University of Information Science and Technology, where I major in Environmental Design. The department is located in the arts and design faculty.

Gợi ý: 观点表达清楚但句子冗长且有语法和搭配问题（"science majors student"等）。建议先给出观点主题句，然后用一两句具体原因，使用连接词如"because"或"because...so"使逻辑更清晰，避免重复。

Ví dụ: I don’t think it’s an ideal place for design students because the college mainly focuses on science programs. As a result, facilities and faculty experience for architecture and other design majors are limited.

Gợi ý: 表达意思明确但有较多语法和用词错误（"these those teachers"，"don't know something about"）。建议用更精确的句子说明希望的改变和理由，并提供具体细节（如希望招聘实践经验丰富的教师或增加行业合作）。使用连接词如"because"或"so that"增强逻辑。

Ví dụ: Yes, I would like the college to hire more specialist teachers for our major because current instructors lack practical experience in environmental design. This would help students gain real-world insights and better prepare for careers.

Gợi ý: 回答含糊且有多处语法问题（"beside on my bachelor study","change my major in the master study","walk in the relevant design company"）。建议先明确计划（继续读研或工作），然后用1–2句具体说明希望转专业的方向或职业目标。保持句子简洁且语法正确。

Ví dụ: After finishing my bachelor’s degree, I plan to pursue a master’s in a related design field, such as architecture or urban design. After that, I hope to work at a design firm that focuses on sustainable environments.

× I'm still a college student, but recently I'm going to graduate.

✓ I'm still a college student, but I'm going to graduate soon.

句子中“recently”通常与完成时连用或表示过去发生的动作。此处学生想表达“即将毕业”，应使用“be going to”加上时间副词“soon”或直接说“I will graduate soon”。建议不要用“recently”来表达将来将要发生的动作。

× Well, I'm study in Nanyang University of Information Science and Technology and and in this college my major is Environmental design.

✓ Well, I study at Nanyang University of Information Science and Technology, and my major at this university is Environmental Design.

原句中出现“I'm study”，这是动词形式错误，正确应为一般现在时“I study”或进行时“I am studying”。此外介词应为“at”而不是“in”来表示在某所大学就读；重复的“and and”应删除；专有名词专业名称首字母大写并保持一致。

× Well I think this is not good place to study because this college is mainly for the science majors student but for some architecture student or other design major student is not suitable to stay at this college.

✓ Well, I think this is not a good place to study because this college is mainly for science majors, so it is not suitable for architecture or other design students.

原句缺少不定冠词“a”应为“a good place”。名词复数/单数使用混乱，应使用复数“science majors”“architecture students”“design students”。另外句子冗长且结构混乱，改为两个并列部分并用“so”连接更清晰。

× Well, I hope this college can recruit professional teachers for our major because I think in this major these those teachers are not professional and they don't know something about this major. College acknowledge.

✓ Well, I hope this college can recruit professional teachers for our major because I think the current teachers are not professional and they don't know much about this subject.

原句使用“these those”是不正确的代词组合，应使用“the current teachers”或“those teachers”。短语“don't know something about”不地道，应改为“don't know much about”或“don't know enough about”。最后“College acknowledge.”不完整且不合适，应删除或重写为完整句子。

× Well beside on my bachelor study, I think in the future I would change my major in the master study and I plan to walk in the relevant design company and for work.

✓ Well, besides my bachelor's studies, I think in the future I would change my major for my master's, and I plan to work in a relevant design company.

原句中“beside on”用法错误，正确为“besides”或“beside”；“bachelor study”应为“bachelor's studies”或“undergraduate studies”；“change my major in the master study”应为“change my major for my master's”或“change my major when doing my master's”；“plan to walk in the relevant design company and for work”是错误用词，应该用“plan to work in a relevant design company”。