Study— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Cải thiện độ tự nhiên và mở rộng thông tin: trả lời nên nêu rõ công việc và thêm một hoặc hai chi tiết liên quan (ví dụ: nhiệm vụ chính, thời gian làm việc, hoặc điều bạn thích). Tránh câu quá ngắn; dùng liên từ nếu cần để nối ý.

Ví dụ: I work as a sales expert at Lotus Healthy Food. I mainly manage client accounts and promote our organic product range, and I have been in this role for two years, which I really enjoy because I meet different customers every day.

Gợi ý: Cần nâng cao độ rõ ràng và ngữ pháp: câu hiện tại khó hiểu (không đúng ngữ pháp). Nên trả lời trực tiếp nơi học (tên trường) và ngành học, dùng cấu trúc đơn giản, tối đa 3 câu, tránh lỗi động từ và trật tự từ.

Ví dụ: I study business at Hanoi University of Economics. I am currently in my second year, focusing on marketing and small business management.

Gợi ý: Làm câu rõ ràng và cung cấp lý do cụ thể: câu trả lời cần giải thích tại sao là nơi tốt (ví dụ: cơ sở vật chất, giảng viên, môi trường học tập) và dùng liên từ để nối các ý.

Ví dụ: Yes, it's a good place to study because the campus has modern facilities and many courses are taught in English, which helps improve my language skills.

Gợi ý: Cần sắp xếp ý và dùng ngữ pháp chuẩn: trả lời nên nêu 1-2 thay đổi cụ thể và giải thích lý do. Tránh từ thừa và dùng liên từ để làm rõ mối quan hệ giữa ý (ví dụ: vì, nên).

Ví dụ: Yes, I would like the study areas to be quieter and better organized for exams because noise distracts me; having dedicated silent rooms would help improve concentration.

Gợi ý: Trả lời ngắn gọn, rõ ràng và có kế hoạch cụ thể: nên nói bạn dự định làm gì (tiếp tục học, học cao hơn, hoặc tham gia khóa học), thời gian hoặc mục tiêu cụ thể. Tránh lời lặp và từ không rõ nghĩa.

Ví dụ: My future study plan is to pursue a master's degree in business administration next year, focusing on marketing, and to complete a short course in digital marketing beforehand to prepare.

× Unsteady is winter than university. I'm learning business.

✓ University is where I study. I'm studying business.

The original sentence has incorrect word order and word choice ('Unsteady is winter than university' makes no grammatical sense). The error fits sentence structure problems (ID 26). Use 'University is where I study' to state the place and change 'I'm learning business' to 'I'm studying business' because 'study' is the correct verb collocation for academic subjects. Suggestion: arrange subject and verb in the correct order and use appropriate collocations (study + subject).

× Yes, it's good play we study on by English.

✓ Yes, it's a good place for us to study English.

The original mixes incorrect words and order; 'good play' and 'study on by English' are ungrammatical. This is primarily an adjective/adverb and word choice issue (ID 13) plus sentence structure. Use 'a good place' and the correct prepositions 'for us to study English'. Suggestion: use 'place' for location and the infinitive 'for us to study' or 'to study English'.

× Dad, I would like some change to to play where I study for exam acting more quiet study yawn and improvising would help concentration.

✓ I would like some changes to the place where I study for exams: making it quieter and allowing fewer interruptions would help concentration.

Original sentence has many problems: wrong pronoun/addressing 'Dad' is irrelevant to the examiner, repeated 'to', wrong words ('play', 'acting', 'yawn', 'improvising') and poor structure. This involves pronoun and sentence structure errors (ID 12 and 26) but primarily incorrect pronoun/use of address. The correction removes 'Dad', uses plural 'changes', corrects 'place where I study for exams' and provides clear actions 'making it quieter' and 'allowing fewer interruptions'. Suggestion: keep responses concise, use correct nouns and verbs, and avoid unnecessary addressing in an exam context.

× My future study plan is al 7 Pi and. Try try it.

✓ My future study plan is to study Artificial Intelligence and to try to work in that field.

Original contains unintelligible fragments ('al 7 Pi and', repeated 'Try try it') and lacks clear verbs. This is a sentence structure and word choice error (ID 26). The correction infers a plausible intended plan ('study Artificial Intelligence' as 'AI' may have been intended) and provides proper infinitive forms 'to study' and 'to try to work'. Suggestion: use clear, complete phrases with infinitives for expressing plans ('My plan is to...').